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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person mKissa
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK I've read this story twice now all the way through! I LOVE IT!

Thanks for the fast updates, I appreciate it!
person Muggle
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was action packed!

1. Krum with Melanie... WOW! He was pissed!
2. Draco's make-out session with Hermione!!! SO HOT! I read it twice!
3. Krum finding Blaise with Draco in the closet! LMAO!!!

Genius!
person know-it-all
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think that it could get better, but it did. The chapter was awesome! Not to mention hillarious!
person moxie
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That ending was hilarious! I'm so glad Draco didn't transform while they were snogging and that Viktor did not then walk in on them. That would have been too much stress for me. I'm dying to know what's in that crystal!!! Is it something totally nefarious? Like a pheromone repellant? Looks like lil Draco's been inadvertantly seduced. oh boy. what is that now - FOUR boys. Go Hermione! So happy for you that your baby is going to be with you for the holidays, but so sad that there will not be any updaes for a while. Have fun!
person Abby
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeez KatDiva!
You are something! And I mean it in a good way, a really good way.
May I inspire myself, may I use Draco's lovemaking as a guideline? LOL!
What I liked in your fiction was the way you described in detail all the actions and reactions/feelings. Moreover, the choice of words, as usual, made me feel like I was reading a novel.

I've read you chapter with Harry's kiss, but I really can't seem to sympathise with the pairing. Maybe because he's too nice, too sweet, too kind. Anyway, please keep writing, I love reading you!

Thanks a bunch for that!
Abby
person lisa
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as usual. Wow that got quite heated there or a bit. good thing Draco screwed up or there would be alot more explaining to do. and Lol getting caught by Viktor was priceless. Lol so funny. I am happy your baby is coming home. My lil monsters are sick and home from school. anyways More more more. Please update soon.
person Kala
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG lol, that was totally unexpected and hilarious. I almost fell off my chair at the end there! Thanks
person strangerdanger89
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOO My God I thought I was going to die when Vikter opened the closet door!
I know that this is a Draco/Hermione story but I want vikter to end up with herminone!
that would be awsome

kay I hope you can update soon

later
strangerdanger89
person mischeifmanaged
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HA HA! That was an awesome ending -- more so because it was Krum who found the two of them. Thanks for updating so quickly with such a wonderful chapter.
person KatDiva
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I don't know if you guys read these reviews, but just in case you do, I wanted to let you know that you are cracking me up! I am getting so many requests to have Viktor with Hermione, Draco with Hermione and Harry with Hermione! You guys can't decide who should get her! LOL It's too cute! Somehow they all can't be happy, but I will make sure they are at least left content! ;-)

Also I love Shiloh's suggestion on the punishment! Wouldn't that be too hot! And Draco would SO deserve it! Unfortunately it may have to come at another time, because I have plans for how Hermione will find out... ohhh but how I'm tempted now! heh!

I just wanted to thank you all for enjoying my story... it's my first fanfic, and even though we all write for fun, I find it refreshing to read your comments! YOU GUYS ROCK!