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Aww I wanted more H/H fluff!! Oh well it was cute with the game!!

Chapter 6

SO confused. Where did Pansy come from? What happened to Hermione?

The drama! MUST READ!

Chapter 7

Oh I get it now. DRACO IS EVIL! And poor Harry. :-(.

I wrote a Draco/Hermione songfic... Thanks for the inspiration!

Cheers!

And...I'm back!

Bet you thought I was gone for good eh? ;)

I just sat here and read through...er...*counts* EIGHT chapters in one go.

And all I can say is wow.

Seriously. WOW. You have it going on with this story, darling! This entire story is packed with sexual tension, humour that made me crack up on occasion, and such perfect characterisation. You haven't made things move too fast (oh GOD - after reading your last chapter everything I say sounds like a massive innuendo now) and...well. It's perfect. And as for the earlier chapters, I adored the vivid descriptions of the dances and feelings that awoke inside Hermione while she was doing them. You describe the dancing really well! I hope that you don't forget about it while writing about the whole sexual whirlwind thing.

But it's DHr forever, you know. None of this HHr nonsense ;)

Love and peace,

Mooncheese x

I don't really care what ship this is. It is a great story and you tell the tale so well.

This is a lot of fun to read. You do know your teen-age angst and drama.

I am not sure why I am cheering for Draco out of the three, but I am.

This is good stuff! I like the flow. Keep it coming please!

no! darn cliff hanger! *shakes fist* you can't end there! I'm hangin here!
man this story is so intense! I feel bad for Harry though :(
I cracked up when it said that he 'went over some plans' with Sirius about what to do XD y'know I coulda sworn he was turnin' into his dad (or at least a mini Sirius) from the way his attitude changed when they were by the lake 0_0
well, can't wait for more! keep up the good work :)

did I mention I like your Vitkor?!!! Yummilcious!

absolutely brillant! love your story, should be doing homework, but just had to read the whole thing is one sitting! love the characters, draco is just fabulous :) can't wait til more. keep up the great work.

Oh my gosh!

Thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much for this BRILLIANT chapter

I just adore this story

Can

Punishment... Hmmm, let's see... I think that Hermione needs to discover (BEFORE she is just shamed with total embarassment) What Draco has done. I think she needs to surprise him the next time they are supposed to get together for a dance practice... by coming in, dancing slowly, provacatively... (To the point she drives him crazy... get him all hot and bothered, where he is screaming out a confession about what he did... then (but I'm not sure she could talk victor into this) let her own polyjuice potion run out, revealing that the dance he just had was with the one and only Victor, who is mad as hell at what Draco did to Hermione...

Imagine how fast that blond bombshell would be running!LOL... Wouldn't I just LOVE to be a fly on the wall for that!

SD