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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Lily Evans Potter
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Poor Hermione!! Harry must be so confused. I hate you so much (in
a good way) because I can't even critize your story-for anything!
Congrats on stumping me.

-Lils
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arrrrgh shoot me now! Poor Draco! Poor Harry!
Poor Hermione!
Krum gets all the love. Thanks for the flashback!
person Know-it-all
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're so cruel to end it there! I loved the potion, by the way. Very exciting.
person Panther Eyes
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is doesnt look good for them now! well dancing can bring out the passion in a person. Just remember Malfoy it was ur fault.
person Dante
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that last part was hilarious
update soon!
person SweetKat
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! What happens next?! I will definitely cry tears of an emo child if you do not update this instant!
person Chavela
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14!

THANK YOU!!!!!!! Yes I want to ravish Viktor! Oh Lord! As long as you throw me some Blaise too! The lovely layered threesome could be complete!!!!! DAmn wicked chapter honey! I loved it!!!!!!!!
person Lady Asuna
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...you...are..so evil! how could you end it like that! wah! i'm going to go cry now! T.T
person Chavela
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15

Hermione then pulled Viktor
person DracoSunkMe
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it. and who knew what the potion would do to her but that is a good side effect lol...keep it up!