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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it, I love it!
Draco cracks me up.
Update soon!
Draco cracks me up.
Update soon!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter as usual. I especially liked this one. Capture the Flag is the best game! Woot! lol Well, can't wait for the next. Draco seemed a little too effeminate at the end...but it's all good fun. I guess his joking just hits too close to home. ^.^
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Confounded: I am going to assume that the only reason this chapter doesn't have more reviews is because of the problems with the site these days. This was a wonderful chapter. Poor Draco he wants Hermione so bad but he wants her to want him because it is him.
It's looking like she will with the lovely images popping up in her head. But then again now she thinks Draco slipped her the potion.
It's kind of funny to read Snape giving his own Slytherins a bad time. Good job.
It's looking like she will with the lovely images popping up in her head. But then again now she thinks Draco slipped her the potion.
It's kind of funny to read Snape giving his own Slytherins a bad time. Good job.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying reading your fic. Please keep it up!
I love how you use elements of suspense and mystery in the plot. You keep me guessing.
And the sexy bits are very sexy. ;]
I love how you use elements of suspense and mystery in the plot. You keep me guessing.
And the sexy bits are very sexy. ;]
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful. I'm awaiting the next cahpter. I do hope Harry and Hermione will be together.
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well-written. It was really sweet, too...
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Misused Words and Expressions:
Nauseous. Nauseated - The first means "sickening to contemplate"; the second means "sick at the stomach." Do not, therefore, say, "I feel nauseous," unless you are sure you have that effect on others.
- William Strunk and E.B. White's "The Elements of Style"
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This is an amazing story. I read all 19 chapters in one night...truly spectacular.
Nauseous. Nauseated - The first means "sickening to contemplate"; the second means "sick at the stomach." Do not, therefore, say, "I feel nauseous," unless you are sure you have that effect on others.
- William Strunk and E.B. White's "The Elements of Style"
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This is an amazing story. I read all 19 chapters in one night...truly spectacular.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story and I can't wait for more...I almost cried when I finished 19 cause there was no more to read.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really nice work! its very fun to read. im actually rooting for viktor a bit because he seems so sweet. im curious as to what draco is up to. after all the things draco does to hermione, he better have a good way of redeeming himself! please keep writing =)