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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person SmileZ
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh hell no, he did not just say 'come to papa' uh uhh he aint her suga daddy. GO HERMIONE PUT HIM IN HIS PLACE! lol i love the fact that everyone is fighting for her in this story. hehe its soo hot! especially how Harry seduced her... but he can't top Draco's dance. hehe. anyways can't wait til your next update!!!! PLEASE LET IT BE SOON!
person BlueLagoon
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Arrrrghhh...why did you have to mention thatshe is only 14. Now I feel like a pervert liking a 14-years old Draco (since I am 17,so one of the reasons like fictions taking place in 7th year).....But the ending was GLORIOUS!!!! "what big....books you have" So Malfoy-like. Good chapter!
person HedwigsSong
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Hello! ^.^

I just started reading this tonight!

I love chapter three!

Aw! It was so sweet! Her first kiss was so awkward it was very sweet. ^^. And... Draco like the Bad Wolf... well, I know they are 14 but that was sexy and... very naughty! He... I liked it a lot!
person Lansing
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to print these out to read them b/c I never have enough time to finish!

Oooh, I love the bantering you have between Malfoy and Hermione! It's so canon and just so Dramione! Gah, I love this story.
person guardgeek
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So does Throwing a Wobbly mean anything or did you explain and i totally missed it? Good chapter and I LOVE this story, just dont always have time to review :( Keep up the good work!!
person Eragon's Bride
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW, three men want Hermione!! What about Ron? Eh, he's a git anyways!

Go Girl! Play those boyz! LOL
person blackdog
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah another chapter!

As soon as I finished reading this the chanting of "fight!fight!fight!"
started ringing in my mind >_>

So funny how they really wanna rip each other apart but just can't seem
to unless the other one makes a move... its like they're *THIS* close,
but nothin'!

And that bit when Hermione was being pulled back and forth,
OUCH... these are two strong boys who are rapidly loosing their temper. I
would NOT want to be in the middle of that 0_o

Oh Draco is just askin' for a beat down! XD
person crazyboy88
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i quite sure u don't need a beta anymore... the story is so damn good i don't bother to check out simple mistakes! keep up the good work... ^ ^ ingatz
person Chavela
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16!

Ala!!!! Thank you so much for the email about this chapter! It was great! I just love the little tug-a-war that Harry and Viktor got into, that was too amusing! And Draco getting a rise from her kissing Viktor, classic! The whole chapter was fantastic!

He closed the space between them and lowered his voice as well as his mouth to her ear.
person Slyffindork
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY! YOU KNOW I LOVE IT!!

p.s. This is "you know who, from you know where!" :-D