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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Sparky
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL@CH16 "how do you say, boys who like boys" HAHAHAHA! priceless!
person Hikaru
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More more more updates !

No criticism . I love everything about your story ! : D
person DustBunny
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll always come back for more, it's a great story! Too bad you had to stop it there, I wanted to see how their dancing went! And I love the British slang terms in there, even though I had no idea what they were till you explained at the end lmao. Update soon!!
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved it... so maybe the "pillow-biter" is soon to be exposed?? Hmm..

Thanks for pointing me out as a loser with no life! *points to clenched fist* No, haha.. seriously, thanks for the great mention! I've added you on my friends list, too. ACCEPT IT, DAMMIT! :P
person lisa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! Hermione's got troubles now! Lol sooo funny. Harry definitely needs to rein in his temper Viktor is quite larger than he is. I'd hate to see what would happen if did go toe to toe with him. And lol Draco god he's so deliciously evil. and Lol Viktor told Hermione about him being supposedly gay/ lmao. Great chappie. I cant wait to see what happens next. maybe we gt to see their dance, maybe even a lil heat too. hehe. more more more please. Pease oohhh please update soon.
person Silidons
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You couldn't keep me away! :P

Great chapter!! I loved the argument between Krum and Harry, and
especially the bit where Krum thought Draco was gay! Brilliant :)

Glad to make you happy with reviews :) I always feel great when I get
them too.

Can't wait for the next!

*~Silidons
person HedwigsSong
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job on Ch 4. Did I mention how surprised I was last chapter when I realized it was 4th year...here I'd been thinking that it was seventh year and they were just having another yule ball... probably getting fics confused.... update soon!
person DracoSunkMe
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah! Now that's what I'm talkin' about! And I love the British slang thrown in there. Definitely wicked. Update fast!
person JuliaChan
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First Kiss:

Nice job! I'm really impressed how you incorporated the whole Viktor liking Hermione situation in, and made it pretty believable! Love how you brought up the age difference... that's always the hardest part! Loved the chapter! I can't wait to read more!

Good luck writing!
person Dante
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Way to Go Hermione!

I'm sorry the reviews aren't not longer, but my 6 month old baby is usually trying to dance right out of my arms as I type! I love your interplay though.