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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person BlueLagoon
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now you are an author I like. One does not have to wait months in order to read the next chapter. Thumbs up for that!!!! My highlight in this chapter (4) was "I can dance your pants off" Hermione was so totally Hermione at that moment. Not letting Malfoy her treat inferior for just a moment. Instead of fighting Malfoy when he said he is better than her, she waited and got him where she wanted him to be. Good chapter!!!
person Pez Master
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was about grinning when Hermione showed Draco in Chapter Four! :P Can't wait for the next part! Will keep reading!
person Rhemus
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Good job!
person Juana202
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two has got to be the sweetest rendition of Harry and Hermione's relationship I've ever read. I'm usually a Draco/Hermione shipper first, and Everyone Else/Hermione shipper next, but that just sold me on the Harry/Hermione relationship. The youth of the characters was captured along with the genuine love between friends. And everyone else (Draco, Ron) was so deliciously jealous.
person Pyroangel
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this!

Wow, I like it so far. I cant wait for the next chapter and what Draco and Blaise have up their sleeves.
person Perfect Potter
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No. Ewwwww. I hate Vik/Hr. Please no!

D/Hr is how I'm feeling this, and she'll dump Harry.

Even thought their time together was nice, It has to go. D/Hr all the way. And oh, I hope Draco hears of this kiss, I love Jealous Draco.

Update Soon!!!
person LaNaHwAnNa
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there... OMG. I loved the chapter. Wow Harry is being way to protective.. Kinda funny. Well can't wait to read more.. See ya...
person Sparky
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAH! SO GOOD! SO GOOD! CHAPTER 15! I wanna see raging hormones go erupt! :P
person Kaneshiro
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, there's really not enough fics with Hermione as the lead character (and her feelings and thoughts in centric)

It's been quite some months since I read a good HP fic, and I will definitely keep reading yours, so please update soon. XD

~Kane
person Britva
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love LOVE love it!

How amazing would it be to have three guys fight over you.

Probably not all that good in real life haha.

But wonderful story. I'm glued to my seat... waiting for more :)

x.
Brittanie