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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good chapter
i thought it had a lot of humor
lol
anyways update soon!
:D
i thought it had a lot of humor
lol
anyways update soon!
:D
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kick it Up a Notch:
Fabulous! I love Hermione's opening remarks about his hair and her 'nothing you can say will bother me' attitude.
My favourite bits:
"Granger," he sized her up and down, his eyebrows dented with doubt, "are you ill?"
"Whenever you're ready to kick it up that notch, let me know."
"Bugger me!"
Tee hee hee. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where you take us.
Fabulous! I love Hermione's opening remarks about his hair and her 'nothing you can say will bother me' attitude.
My favourite bits:
"Granger," he sized her up and down, his eyebrows dented with doubt, "are you ill?"
"Whenever you're ready to kick it up that notch, let me know."
"Bugger me!"
Tee hee hee. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where you take us.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!
That was amazing!
I loved it!!
Write more.... NOW!!!
Pleasepleaseplease!!!
quote:"Malfoy, I can dance the pants off you."
Something flashed in his eyes causing them to darken. "Is that a promise, Granger?"
Oooooh, I feel this tension, I love it!!
~*~PerfectPotter~*~
That was amazing!
I loved it!!
Write more.... NOW!!!
Pleasepleaseplease!!!
quote:"Malfoy, I can dance the pants off you."
Something flashed in his eyes causing them to darken. "Is that a promise, Granger?"
Oooooh, I feel this tension, I love it!!
~*~PerfectPotter~*~
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha loved it! I would rather Hermione be with Draco...you probably know already, Im a huge fan of that match. Cant wait for the next chapter!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really cute, yet snarky as well. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter, and thanks for replying, that's a lovely touch. Keep up the brilliant work!!
And awww "the only seeker she wouldn't seek" - poor Draco, but I suppose he deserves it at the mo? You write him beautifully!
CDxx
And awww "the only seeker she wouldn't seek" - poor Draco, but I suppose he deserves it at the mo? You write him beautifully!
CDxx
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Take that Malfoy! He didn't see anything coming. He was totally put off, and btw... I loved how Hermione's attitude didn't flinch for a sec. That must be bliss... and determination. Great Chapter!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! Very much.
Love the interplay between them, the dialogue, the fact that Hermione is keeping Draco off guard and he's so uncomfortable with that. Very nice sexual tension too!
Love the interplay between them, the dialogue, the fact that Hermione is keeping Draco off guard and he's so uncomfortable with that. Very nice sexual tension too!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done, I'm looking forward to more. I wonder what Draco has planned for the third act. I just looooved the Draco just stood there and watched the whole time. I woulda loved to have been a fly on THAT wall. "Come to Papa" lol, classic.
Truly,
Glora
Truly,
Glora