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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person DracoSunkMe
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love, love LOVE the story...especially the end of your chapter! lol it's so awesome!

Please write more!
person Davi
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter...but someone it seems out of character...like it was a misplaced chapter. I don't know. I'm just a little confused. I
guess things will be explained in the next cahpter. You have a wonderful story. Please don't fall prey to writers block like I did. You did an outstanding job!
person Gisselle
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Go Hermione go! lol! wow!!!! so romantic and still funny because of Malfoy! update soon 10/10
person Danielle
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah, that chapter was just beautiful..
No other way to describe it =)

Can't wait for the next one!!
person Kaz
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Kat, it's grand! Lovely chapter!
person SilverRain
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I loved this chappie! Poor hermz though, that could throw one into quite a tailspin...
I don't know that I'd handle seductive draco as well as she did...
Kudos!
person Silidons
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lacking? Boring? No! What ever are you thinking you mad, mad woman!

Another excellent chapter, loving it!

*~Silidons! :)
person deeply.jaded
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn! To stop where you did.... Get me al hot and bothered and then drop it! Well, I know, did the same thing not so long ago, but damn!
But really, you've written another wonderful chapter. But please, bring it to another seriously HOT level (I beg you!), because you're driving me insane. And I know I'm not the only one with this request.
But stil keep on with the great writing and I'm looking foward to another update.
I'll be keeping my eye out for lemony goodness!! Hahaha

DJ
person DustBunny
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh another chapter!! And they're actually getting somewhere, how exciting! Awesome chapter, even though you JUST posted this, I want to tell you to keep writing! I can't get enough now. You should update soon!
person moxie
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh boy. what a scene! but I have a questin - the scene with Draco and Hermione - is that a continuation from last chapter when he said "come to papa"? because he is acting very differently then he did then. When did he develop such feelings for her? I knew he was jealous and lusting after her, but this seems like he's already fallen and knows it. I'm a little confused.