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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Firebird
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this...so much!!! Make sure you update soon, you hear!

you know you love me...
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person Ochre Rainbow
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's a very enjoyable story and I look forward to reading more of your work.
person Petalsoft
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a good chapter this is! Love their interaction. You continue to write smart, snappy dialogue which is really fun to read. Good job!
person JuliaChan
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! D/Hr action! I'm lovin' it! Your story is so fun to read, and I can't wait to read the next one! I'm so excited!

~Julia
person K Emma
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great story, but keep going dammit, I'm hooked!
person Fortune Cookie
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliffie!!! UPDATE SOON!
person Puma
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol! loved the ending! update soon! this is getting interesting!
person BuffyXO
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful chapter! I am so happy that you finally got them together for real. I would imagine that Hermione is going to be more confused than ever about her feelings, but again, I loved it. I am glad that you had a realistic coupling that showed how she fought against her attraction and then felt her boundaries melt with his earnestness. It made my day and my stomach flip -- please update soon and keep up the great job!
person strangerdanger89
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I was not expecting the draco & Hermione action for at least another 3 chapters or so.
But don't get me wrong I am not complaing.
It was quite the interesting peice! Well that is an understatement I loved it!!!!!!
I'll check back later for another chapter

later
strangerdanger89
person Nikki
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I really loved the dance sequence and how it incorporated with the story. How Draco kept ignoring her and continued to talk
about the dance. Really well done. Please update soon!

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