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for Dance with the One that Brought You

by KatDiva

person Lily Evans Potter
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Finally!! LoL. Aww your RLExperience is so cute. Can't wait for more!!

xoLily
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The dance seen was beautiful. My heart skipped a beat. The detail was so good. Wow i cant wait to read more! I love this story.
person crazyboy88
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and i thought the fic couldn't get any better... d dance part was the best, im sure no1 got bored :D anyways keep it up!
person LexcAngel
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was such a beautiful chapter! I loved the descriptions, they flowed on so perfectly and gave it such a romantic atmosphere. I can't wait
for the next chapter ^^
person Sameera
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done. I like new Draco very much.
person Julia
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I even laughed out loud a few times. I can see this is going to be a great story. Haha, pointy ballet shoes, I'm a ballerina, it'll be interesting to see how you incorporate ballet into this. Anyways, kudos, nice chapter.
person blackdog
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter *gush*

So that's why it was easy for me to picture how they danced in this.

Its so well described and the change in Draco was just like "wow, this is... nice" ^_^

My goodness, two kisses in one session? The lucky girl X3
person Lansing
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is so amazingly awesome! Can't wait for more! YAYY!

They are kissing! Will it go further? In the dance studio!? Awesome! Yes I love to dance. I do dance so I understand when you get carried away and it doesn't bother me. Can't wait for more! Please update REALLY soon!
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gimmie Gimmie Gimmie....
person Yuliet
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I HAVE READ ALL OF THIS STORY AND I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!

Sorry for the caps but I feel it delivers more emotion. Well, I particully liked this chapter because i have to cheorograph my sister's sweet 15 dance and ,lol, i was sort of like imagining the steps.

Cant wait for the next chapter!!

~Yulietjco92
(p.s. Sorry for my lousy spelling)

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