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for Tricker Treated

by Darzee

person Anon
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very amusing...the story is almost perfect..only the part where they go from healing the hand to the sex...really does not go with teh flow of the story..it seems like you just rushed into it too quickly. It almost does not match up to the beginning of the story and follows a generic plot. The beginning you have with teh pumpkins and stuff is unique and intersting..i like the idea of Harry playing a prank with teh twins. please keep writing
person teeta
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Severus is really evil ... But I loved what he did to poor, poor and naive Harry.
person Thylacina
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*lol* Very funny. I enjoyed this one, keep up the great work!
person Hisui
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHAHA! I LOVE YOU! Hot, cute, and funny all in one. Perfect! ^_~
person antipyro
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story...love the sneers and the suggestive pumpkin.
person Sarah
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOMELY gigglish. Is that even a word? <_< Anyway...I LOVED IT!
person Woof.
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was just so cute and funny^.^. And sweet! I had to giggle the whole time, and FrendnGeorge were so well written.

I especially liked when the "pumpkin regarded them blandly".
person density
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was...amazing. Nothing I was expecting, and very well written! Great job, keep up the good work!
person Sophia
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very entertaining Halloween fic; too bad that didn't really happen in OoTP. Keep up the great work with all of your fics!!
person libldyjean
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha. very nice. my smile can't get any bigger. and i am positive the twinkle in my eyes would rival AD's.