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for Fallen Angel

by heaven56

person kami_no_yami
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I don't belive i've ever read a story that goes down this vien of plot before, what w/the whole buying/selling in a strage Muggle appt. I believe I would like to see where this is going. Please update soon. I do have one correction. In chapter two Snape says to Harry: "Is this WHAT your master had you do!" I think you put the emphasis on the wrong word it should be "Is THIS what your master had you do" unless of course you did this on purpose and I didn't get it; but hey whatever, it's your story do as you will!

Ja ne! ^.~
person harry-draco
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hm, interesting story so far. Please update soon
bye
harry-draco^,^
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the start update soon
person Hambares
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read what Poppy will thinkof all of this. The abuse Harry has suffered! Poor little guy!
person l'etje
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is very good beginning keep gong and post soon
bye bye
person Blinded_HP
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just quickly want to point something out to you. When I started "Life as I know it" I didn't know a lot about BDSM and Dom/sub relationships but since then I've been e-mailing to and throw with a submissive in America.

She pointed out to me that whenever a sub addresses his/her Dom they do so with a capital letter, ex. master would be Master.

I like the fic thus far and if you need any help with finding more information I can provide you with a few links that had helped me with the writing of my own fic.

Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter.
person Sophia
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start and I would love to read more. Keep up the very good work!!
person Sophia
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so quick. Another excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work!!
person amyordinary
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Snape.. that guy doesn't deserve to leave, but his death had better be slow and painful!
person miku
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Keep up the good work!