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for Fallen Angel

by heaven56

person Sophia
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I really love how it's coming together and Ican't wait to read the next chapter!
person harry-draco
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww, what a sweet chapter, absolutly great.
Please update soon
bye
harry-draco^.^
person Hine
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww!!! <3 Can't wait for the next chapter. I LOVE Master x Slave fics. ESPECIALLY Snarry ones. Keep up the good work! ^-^

~HINE
person elmo
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
despite the fact that its really disturbing to have a little boy so used to being a sex slave... i really like your story! is harry going to grow up and still think he isnt worth anything? or is he going to be confident and independent? when sev and harry get together... can it be a top!harry?
person harry-draco
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great, again a new chapter. I like it,
please update soon
bye
harry-draco^,^
person Hambares
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Now no one can legally take Harry from Snape.
person l'etje
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Sophia
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Severus got to be Harry's guardian. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is getting even more interesting!! Keep up the superb work!
person AllyKat
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need to proof read your work closer. Some of your word usage is wonky. "Wired" for weird, "aloud" for "allowed", etc. Distracts the reader.
person l'etje
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going and post soon
byebye