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for Hidden Feelings

by Alienpr2128

schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

Your story is good, but a little hard to read. If you want, I can Beta it for you, and you can repost it. I Beta for Draco's Desire and Madlodger, so far. Draco's Desire has (unforunately) abandoned her story, but if you want to read my or Madlodgers story(s), you are more than welcome. I am great with grammar and spelling, as well as sentence fragments and weird sentences, which I have spotted in your story. I hope you will email me to let me help!

Slashy Snitch
person Principessa
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Keep going! Now mush I say!
person awww
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so sad i lvoe it keep u pthe good work