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person Tess
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To: For Me

Your righteous indignation would be amusing, if not for the morally reprehensible fact that you called Ms Figg a thief. You slanderously accused her of plagiarism without so much as a shred of evidence backing up your statement. I challenge you to come up with a single line stolen from someone else
person Amethystique
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew! How HOT was that? I'm just going to the bathroom now, I really need a cold shower. Is he available next Thursday?
Blessings
Amethystique x
person phistolemon
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love your fics.
there's not more I can tell, I simply love them.
please go on with the good work, your mind is brilliant ;D
person klc
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good. i only read the forth chapter though and i must say you have a talent for hot sex seens. but im curiouse how do you imagine this story going if it were more then porn and only four chapters? Would it stay pure sex or would their feelings change. i could care less if thier feelings changed but writer to writer i just want you to think about what i said.
person Rani
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Usually leave my reviews on your site, but felt you might need to feel the love here too after reading the review board at your place. Keep up the good works.
person Empress
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I skipped school to read your stories (I e-mailed you about that). I check constantly to see if you have added a new story or added to updated a fave. So I get mad when I see others ragging on your stories. She is entitled to her opinion. But she needs to remember that it's just her opinion.

This is not to belabour what has been said before. This is just encouragement. I prefer to review a complete story because I need to read the whole thing to tell you if I like it. But if it's a one-shot or 110 chapters I'm there with you for them all. I don't love all your stories but I respect you as an author and I respect your incredible talent. You write a little faster than I read so I'm never without something to read.

I like that you didn't brush aside what was said. As a reader, she had valid grouses. But never forget that there are other readers for whom a story that does not strictly follow canon is not spoilt and who like apperation points and "lab-rat" nifflers. This is all I have to offer you. My support and reviews. Thank God for you and your twisted mind. My mind twists in exactly the same direction.
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yum Dark Severus.

Lol fantasizing about Ron, kinda heart breaking to find out you were just another pussy.
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes Hermione is now a nasty witch!
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Ron must have SUCKED.
Hermione's first orgasm by Snape? Geez.
person Queen Celestia
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What? Your ending it here?
HAha back to Snapes old adage "I will fuck you if you won't fuck anyone else!"
Waiting for Hermione to be all "Oh? Will that apply to you as well?"
AND if he's all "No I will be able to fuck whomever I want" to see the battle appear.
But then again if he gets her right after an orgasm he'd have better luck.

Anyways I suppose it's ok if you end it here, since it's all open ended and I can imagine what could possibly happen. :)