rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

too great!

Hot. Hot. Hot. Hot!!! OMG, that was so hot! I love how detailed you are. A lot of people are like... "and then he fucked her" but that was soooo good. I hope you write more stories with a dominating snape. I like dominating snape and I bet thats how he would really be in bed too.

Ooh... rough rough Severus. *gush*

wow. Snape was mean in this story...but still HOT! :::fanning::: Still, it seems like he wants Hermione for himself in the end since he doesn't want her to do anyone else. Maybe something else could happen between them...like love? Liked this alot. Now to find my boyfriend.

its amazing how you can take similar situations for basically the same characters with so many similarities and yet still make each story so different.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

Dam girl! That was good. Ever wright a full bondage scene with those two? What that man might do with a spreader bar and a riding crop, I want to see.

Niiiiiiiicccccccccceeeeeeeeeeeee.

Good writing. Very hot.

klc: Most likely if this fic continued, they would eventually develop a relationship, with this particular Severus refusing to see or admit he actually loves Hermione until something (probably pretty horrible and life-threatening) happens that makes him realize she completes him and he does love her. Then most likely he would have to do the "dark hero' thing, risking his own life to save hers. Pretty standard stuff...but the fun is in the telling of course.

I'm pretty well stuck on happy endings for the pair...so this intitial lust-fest would definitely have grown into something substantial between them. But in this case, I just wanted to write something short and yummy.