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for The Victor ~ An Alternative Scenario

by Ms_Figg

person Persy
schedule January 18, 2022 at 12:00 AM

So sweet!!!!

person Anon
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person firewall
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - I am glad that you ended this story where you did. I had the some thoughts that Sirius was going to push his way in and interrupt their lemons. I also agree with you that heaven does seem an interesting place.
person firewall
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - Oh, I can just tell that Sirius is going to be a real pain in the as, er, neck. I think with him, you either love him or hate him. I personally don't like him but my daughter thinks he's great. Anyway, I like this alternative ending and I must say that the back and forth and back and forth of the time turner was priceless...I found it sadly funny. Carry on Ms Figg, only another day and a bit to go before Wednesday.
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet. I was wondering about your three diff stories. Power machine!
person angel
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... i hope after you finsh the other two you do come back to this one ... later for now

angel
person lisa
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. just awesome. I love it. Yay finally they are joined. Heaven does sound nice. and as I have said many times before if only to be Hermione. Told you you'd manage though, you are quite talented.
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who this reader could be? ;)
Certainly became different than how I thought it would be [them in death] but that's why I like you. You do everything differently! :D