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for Intrusion

by ccrawley

person luvhp
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad, Poor Hermione being abused to final conceive his child. Good story.
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1: Gulp! Yup, dark. I haven't read a Voldemort/Hermione fic before (a V/H virgin, LOL!) but I can see that this pairing might have some attractions to it if one likes angst to the nth degree - and sometimes I do.

I guess I would like to know if Hermione ever gets away, but this is good as a one-shot also. Voldemort is completely irredeemable, the Death Eaters are vicious, and Hermione has only death to release her from her torture, but it sounds like she'd rather live, no matter what. So is my favorite blondie in with the crowd, taunting Hermione from the sidelines? Maybe I'd rather not know. I could see the senior Crabbe and Goyle and Bellatrix urging on Voldemort, but Malfoy would more likely be quietly standing nearby, coldly passing Voldie the knife.

Fascinating, disturbing window into the future if Voldemort won. Thanks for the story!
person LilyLady
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:'(
person amazed
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no just dont do it
person Koppe
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Short and dark. Wouldn't mind a sequel though, about her pregnancy, and about her and the child.
(There really ought to be more Hermione&Lord Voldemort/Tom Riddle stories here...)
person Lioncourt
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somehow, I like this.
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very dark, but I liked it! Well done!
person knutts
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good beginning. i hope you continue, her being pregnant by Voldemort opens the door to a multitude of possible story lines.