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for Mind Meld

by Ariande

person Amessis
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it again!
person YamiBakura
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter six:

Oh, yay! You updated! I was so glad you hadn't forgotten about this or something. ^_____^
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapters always end; it is sad. But now that Harry has come to the realization that he trusrts snape i wonder if theyre ever going to tell him about what happened...
person Tac
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I spent that whole chapter ignoring the scroll bar and didn't realize when I got to the end! How mean! *cries* I really do love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! I want to know what's going on with that link and why the scars transferred! Also why Snape can't get into Harry's mind but Voldy can - it can't be increased Occlumency if Voldemort is still able to get in. I'm really loving how you write the interactions outside compared with the mind conversations. The way they treat each other is really well done - like the shove that looks normal but meant something else. I like how they can separate the relationship in the minds from normal life. Update please!!
person Cyador
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much and would really like to know where you'll be taking it - so I hope you'll update soon!
person kitty
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Morgan
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I hope you write more on it, because I'm really wanting to see what else develops. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
person gryffindrorgrl86
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! you updated!!! I was soo happy to see an update! I never get to many stories i like to update. it sucks! I cant wait for the next chap. they finally get to see each other! cant wait for that, or n e smut that will come with it ^_^
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story means more to me than you will EVER know. Please continue this; I want to know where it's going . It's one of my favorites, and I'm hoping that it's only just starting. Hope the shagging will be good, too, with Dom!Draco!

Slashy Snitch
person SLQ
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, you write really well and have an interesting flair for dialogue. I hope you continue the story soon! By the way, I like the way you are building the relationship with Harry and Draco.