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MORE ANSWERS TO CHAPTER 3 REVIEWERS:
dark_samira - Wow, thank you so much! It will come to the 'good part' (or disturbing part) for sure. I can't write 'good parts' only, have to have a plot development first. I think that smut is hotter with the plot, LOL. We'll get there:)

It's funny that you mention 'doing a fanfic about fanfic' thing; I do it all the time. In fact, this entire story is just that, It takes off right where the book six had ended. I want the book seven so badly:)

You are welcome to write any story based on mine, why not. It might be even better than mine, since I have no writing experience whatsoever.

I won't update soon, but chapter four has been started already and parts of five and almost all of six had been written.

teeta - It's perfectly fine, discussions are welcome on this board:) I don't obsess about reviews and post answers to them on the same board as well.

I've seen some MVs amd small clips of Gundam Wing on yuotube, but didn't make it to the fandom itself, it was always HP and, later, Original work. I've read Snarry a lot around two years ago and did more of Drarry since then.

"Green eyes sublime" has been rec'd quite a lot, I always liked that title. A thing that put me off a bit was the fact that Harry was a cutter. This just doesn't click for me for some reason. Being covered in battle scars is fine, but selfinflicted... No. The fic is really good otherwize. "The Pandora Complex" by Nimori is a blast, I might of read "Severus' very bad day", title sounds familiar, but can't quite put my finger on it. Havn't read others:(

I like darker Snape, 'Coils of Gold' is a good example. "The Death of a Soul", (AFF) is like that, hurt/no comfort accepted concept is so in character for Harry. I even left a review about that.

There ARE Snarry fans out there. On JG's journal all people who left reviews are for sure, hehe. They do like Cambiare:D

I would like to talk about "Maturare", yep. As for being 'beyond your reach', well, you can't throw things at me, but my e-mail is in my profile, you are welcome to use it:) Don't have anything mysterious to report, just an ordinary person in the ordinary town, clicking away on an ordinary keyboard... As for gender thingy, well, beings on my planet reproduce by selfpollination, so it's not really an issue... I'm kidding, hehe! It's really cloning:)

Why don't I iust e-mail that 'Coils of Gold' link to you? See how that goes.

madlodger

this is becoming one of my favourite fics already.
I confess I'd like for it to come quickly to the good part since so far is a bit depressing on Harry's side and nothing much happended, but I know that it's important to put down some ground explanations of the situation they're in, so don't take my comment as a rebuke, it is not.
It's just my non-existent patience that is speaking ^^
Yesterday night I went to bed thinking about how it could keep going, it was like doing a fanfic about your fanfic, LOL.
(I won't do it, don't worry, even because I doubt it'll be half as good as yours).
I hope you'll update soon

Hello again,

I know I have reviewed the third chapter but I am using your review board as the discussion one now. Well, you said I was welcome to it so ...

I know what you mean, saying Harry Potter fandom is your first love. For me it was in fact Gundam Wing - and the funny thing is I have never seen the series, but I loved fanfiction nonetheless. As to HP ... well, I couldn't make myself read it at first. But there was this story, Snarry in fact that I loved from the very beginning, though I started to read it to see how sick it was. And it wasn't! It was simply great. So I got terribly hooked on Snarry from that story on. The title was "A stitch in time" I believe ... Have you ever read it?

Unfortunately, I didn't read "Coils of Gold" ... do you happen to know where I can find it? I would like to give it a try. And what about you reading the story "Light on the dark side of me"? It happens to be my second favorite Snarry. And it was posted here, on AFF so if you didn't read it, you can find it here. Um, what else do I remember? Let me check my HP Snarry Archive of DOOM ...

So ... you do like angst ... hm ... there is this brilliant story, "I'm already gone" by redfox131, with two endings, one happy and one heartbreaking, then "In this world for you" by SnapesFavorite, ongoing still, and "Green eyes sublime" by Spirit. If you haven't read that last one, I highly recommend it. It's so dark and has the best scene of defeating Voldemort I have ever read. Oh, and "Side effects" by catsncritters, on hold though and for quite some time ...

But if you would like to read something lighter ... and naughtier ... have you read "Popkins" by Becca and Tinkering? It made me laugh so hard, you shpould try if you haven't. And "The Pandora Complex" by Nimori. Or "Veritas vos liberabit" by StarryGazer. Or "Severus' very bad day" by juxtaposed. Oh, this one is pure crack!

Um, so that would be it for now. Probably you have read most of those stories, they are by the best HP writers out there so ... BUT I'm so excited that I have found someone to talk to about my HP fixation! Starnge but with so may Snarry fans out there I haven't come across even one. You're the first person who said they like Snarry ... And "Cambiare".

Speaking about "Maturare" - yes, I also think it will be posted one chapter at a time. All the good things come in small packages, unfortunately. I would be very happy if we could talk about it when it is posted but ... you are beyond my reach. You know, you're the most mysterious person I "know" - I don't even know if you're a man or a woman. If YOU want ... could you contact me? My address is in my writer's panel, so if you happen to have some spare time (I know, RL is very busy for you, as it is for me) ...

Ok, I'm off, I have rambled on and shamelessly demanded you to contact me ... *blushes with shame* but don't feel obliged to do so, I wouldn't like to put you into uncomfortable position ... See you soon, either in another review or maybe in my response. Oh, I will be checking this board and your not so little "Golden Nuggets" project. Um, so ... see you!

teeta

ANSWERS TO CHAPTER 3 REVIEWERS:
It would be nice if AFF allowed authors to reply to individual reviews, like Forever Fandom., where this story is posted also. All of those reviews are getting answered in less than two days because of it.

kanaro - Yep, it had to happen. Sorry. As for making Draco to give him a hug... well... beware of what you wish for, hehe.

Slashy Snitch - Thank you! And I'll do it again, still can't beleive that people would do something like that. You handled it so well, loved those e-mails you sent me.
It's going to be a while before the next chapter, but it's coming for sure:)

smellysocks - Cherry pie I've got, haha! I want 'infinite internets' very badly, though. Just imagine, I would become a part of the 'inin' crowd.

I just finished reading that Parody you've posted and can't stop from laughing. You are a sarcastic beast, smellysocks, I loved it! You've got to post more, crackfic or regular, anything:)

stasha - Well, Harry always had been unlucky, from the beginning. He can't defeat Voldy now, of course, that's why his illness is being kept a secret. More staff is coming.

Vibora - I feel sad for him also, even though I am responsible for writing that, hehe.

mphoenix - Wish I could be quick, but I am a very slow writer. Chapter 3 was rewritten a few times and shortened 1/4 before being posted. Some people can post every week, sadly I am not that good:(

teeta - Harry changed for sure. He is becoming an adult, for one thing. He sustained permanent damage to his magic, for another. 2/3 of magic gone. It could be compared to getting paralized from a waist down for muggles. A person can still be independent, sort of, but things will never be the same. Couldn't strip him of all magic, because magic=life, take all of it away and a person will drop dead. Even muggles have some magic inside:) That hospital scene was written as a 'dark humor' bit. Dark, because, heck, a helpless man is being taking advantage of. He was glad to get out of there.

I still stand on my opinion about your story. You saying about 'keeping failing' got me thinking. You might have the same affliction, like I do, I call it a 'writers blindness'; It prevents writers from evaluating their own works in detached fashion. That's why my Beta is so important to me, not only those numerous mistakes are being corrected, but I feel more confident before posting a new chapter:)

'Cambiare Podentes' is the best Snarry for sure; I am so glad that you like it! *hugs* I read it on Jordan Grant's journal and, after it was finished, had an 'Ivocare' weekend, that's when I get to read the entire thing at the leisurly pace with no interruptions. The second one is being called 'Maturare' (a bit strange) and I can't wait. The whole story is being completed right now, but, I bet, it'll be posted one chapter at a time. Don't be sorry about salivating, hehe. I view this board as Review and Discussion board, so all interesting discussions are welcome! Talking about Snarry bond fics, have you read 'Coils of Gold'? Pretty dark, huh?

AFF Original section is my home, but Harry Potter fandom is a first love, hehe. 'Golden Nuggets' project had taken over my free time and no new story can be started before finishing that first:) I am behind on reviewing also, :( You welcome, I wish that ALL stories on the list were as good as yours.)

'Gift of the insight', huh? *blushes and passes out*. That's what I get for posting drunken reviews... That was a joke, haha! I don't drink. Hope that you remember this when reading a real drunken review, it's likely to happen at some point:)

Kolgrim - Sorry for taking so long. Surprizing that people didn't forget about this story alltogether. Harry, Ron and Hermione are a way too high profile to go around as themselves anymore. It's not safe or private. So, they polyjuice into random Goblins:)

'Poor Harry' is right, it will only get worse. The only way he can fly now is as a companion of a real flyer. As for Draco making him feel better...... Who knows? He might not feel anything... Or too much.... We'll see. *evil laughter*

The nurses were wicked, I am trying to warm people up to a real dark staff, so it wouldn't be a shock when it happens. Comatose people have no control over people around them, it's pretty sad.

You welcome, will write more for sure, but not very fast.

I like my list also, your stories ALL had made the list, that is rare. Thank you for writing them. Not all of the stories on there are the same caliber, some of them could use a Beta, but they all have something special, good ideas or dialogue or a fresh approach. You might find some interesting staff for sure:D *hugs*

Anon - I am working on it, but it won't be soon. The chapters are long, though, they can count as two, if it makes you feel better:)

madlodger

Hey, finally a third chapter! Thank you ^__^ Three goblins, now why do I find them so amusing I wonder, hehe.

Poor Harry; he lost most of his power! And can't even fly yet, the one thing he loved the most! I hope it will at least be fixed. And Maybe, just maybe him getting it on whit Draco... um, would make him feel betterrrr? hm? *giggles*

The nurses were quite wicked in the hospital *shakes finger at them* and I found it amusing how people were crying on that hand of his.

Thank you and please write more ^.^

Oh and I also want to thank you for the great compliment of adding my fics in that list of yours!*hugs* What a great idea it was to create it, I must check upon some stories you placed there!

OMG! update soon!!....please :)

Hello,

Finally I got some time to read your third chapter! And I think that was one of the most unusual Harrys I have even seen. First of all his Goblin form, then his calm depression (well, he usually throws a tantrum when depressed of pissed off) and then the loss of 2/3 of his magic. Well, at least you left him some. Other authors usually strip him of everything if they decide to rid him of his magic. I wonder if his later mating with Draco will heal him or not.
The scene in the hospital was funny, I was grinning like a maniac, you made it so perect, I could feel Harry's mortification and at the same time be able to see the funny side of this even. That is, if there is a funny side to something like this. Liverbreath ... a very good nickname!
And I am curious where do you plan to go from that, really curious. Thank you for this chapter!

Now to other things. Thank you very much for what you have said but I certainly don't feel I have written - like you said - one of the best fics here. Just the opposite, it gets so frustrating sometimes, I want to make it perfect and keep failing, that's what I feel.
You read "Cambiare POdentes: Invocre"? OMG, that's the best Snarry fic I have ever read! I love this story and can't wait patiently enough for the next part. It's supposed to be released like ... this MONTH! Gah! Jordan Grand surely made us wait long but ... if the next part is as good as Invocare ...
Sorry for having started to salivate like that, it's not nice, especially when commenting on your story. But you are the first person out there who told me they liked "Cambiare" ...
Oh, one more thing! Please, publish that original story of yours, please. I am so dead curious about it and would like to read it. So if you find time, put it up there in our section! You see, I consider it my home in the net - probably you too, judging by the time you spend browsing it ... So please, publish it! It would be so nice to have a madlodger story there! Pretty please!!
Ok, I will be finishing. Thank you for answering my review and putting my story in your 'Golden Nuggets' - I believe I haven't thanked you properly yet so THANK YOU and see you hopefully soon! (have I ever told you that I enjoy your reviews immensely? Well, I think I haven't so I'm telling you now. I love your reviews and consider them the most important, always. You have a rare gift of the insight and you always notice the most important things. So thank you for reviews you're leaving for me, thank you, thank you.)
teeta

oh how i wait for the next. please be quick

omg!! poor harry! i feel so sad for him. update soon! :)

beautiful. beautiful!! best fic ever. seriously. i award you infinite internets and cherry pie and smex.
-smelly