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by Lucie

person Leentjef
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow very very very good
this unbeliveblet his was wow
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Danny
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please finish....
person kunitsu
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just keep getting better every chapter. Ohhh the final battle is coming and I cant wait to see what Harry and Severus will do. Keep up the good work and update soon
person eru
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing storytelling, I enjoyed every piece of it.
Wow, this is indeed a cliffhanger ending. I am afraid Fagid is more vulnerable then he thinks facing Voldemort, having such a big hart loving so many people... the cute little slave. I am so curiuos what Voldemort has come up with to get him.
Yusuf must be quite pissed off, but what was he thinking? Giving away a slave like that to be taken to a world where the fight for rights is the trendiest thing? Quite a bold step from a several hundred years old vampire. Or is there smg else ok dont read further but my mind is racing.. what if.. what if all was evilly planned...
person Selera
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! BATTLE! I can't wait for next week!
person Pimpshit
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that you are a wonderful author with a very creative mind! i truly think that one of the marks of a good author is their ability, if they want to, to use true facts combined with a fictional story. its an icrebible talent and takes a very creative and thoughtful mind to do it. I also feel that i just have to say, I LOVE YOUR STORY! its increadible and I have always been looking forward to your next chapter since the first time i started reading this story!
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! [rips at hair] EVIL CLIFFIE! EEEEEEEVVVVIIIIIILLLLLL!
person Faschmer
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great as always =)can't wait for your next update :)
person crissy
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my! where is the next chapter? i have to know. farid is facing off with voldemort and then.... what?!
person Leentjef
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW VERY VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE