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AAAHHHHHH! What a beautiful ending. Almost made me cry. I loved the whole swan thing, nice touch. I absolutely love this fiction. Great work. Hope I see another great story soon. ^__^

I'm glad that Farid was able to stand up to Yusuf, thank goodness he didnt cause anymore trouble for Severus and Farid. Im looking forward and dreading the epilogue of this. You truly have done a wonderful job on this story.

very very good keep going and post
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

WOW! You had me going there for a moment. I thought that Farid was really going to go with his parents. Oh! and I have to say that I love the part where Severus told Ron to hex Dumbledore if try anything, love that. Please update soon. Can't get enough of your story. ^__^

that was beautiful. well done

EEK! I LOVE this story!! ^_^ its SO worth reading! every chapter is worth reading!!! ^_^ I LOVE your story and i hope you keep writing more!!! ^_^

Umm tell me that isn't the last chapter... Please? Say he's waking up.

Well that was an unexpected twist. Farid is in a coma but I think Sev can wake him up, oh please let him and Sev have a happy ending. Cant wait to see whats going to happen next

wow... that was intense. my heart was racing a mile a minute. this story is worthy of an epic novel. it's so well written and the plotline rocks. i love, love, LOVE the journey you've taken the characters on. and you've avoided all the cliches of typical harry/severus fiction. the characterization is so rich and true to life. you've made everyone in this story, even asswipes like fudge, human and relateable. you've been true to the world rowling created and yet made it your own. i've never read a more fascinating harry/voldermort battle anywhere. the best part is how you've incorporated the other minor characters and made them just as personable without taking focus away from our fav couple. well done. this should truly be archived everywhere that hosts potter fanfiction. i think anyone looking to write potter fanfiction should read this as a reference. great job and i so look forward to the next update.

okay i have got to tell you...this last few chapters has had me bawling my face off...i just finished chapter 44 and now i am like in the story smiling like a loon...i can't wait for the next update...omg...what a wonderful update...i have to say though when i read babies, before reading anything else, my mind just went nuts saying farid was pregnant and dead...omg...this was too much...i just freakin loved it...wow...next chapter soon please...they need to have smut and man to man not master slave...would love to see farid top sev...sorry just my pervert coming out of me...lol...keep up the good work...