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by Lucie

person puccachu
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgosh
absolutely delicious!!
sucha swt story
sucha swt ending
i'm in love =3
can't describe how good, how touching this story is
loved it alot!

on a weird note~
i'm part mongolian hmm its too funnie hearing temujin in the story lol
awesomeness
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell!!!! It's ****ing awesome, really. I think this fic is one of the best I've ever read out of master/slave fics. At first, Farid's accent written down puts me off since i have to read a second time to understand what's being said. However as i read on i come to understand that it's unique and it's Farid. I wonder that it's be better to call him Harry after all of them'd known that farid is harry - but then again even though farid is harry; harry is just a name not farid who has lived his life with that name. Also, I think it's really sweet and heartwarming, not to mention that farid is really strong after all that rapes and all. I felt like hexing severus with the most cruellest hex when he added salt to the wound after the incident with Nott, but he make up for it to farid. I wish there's mpreg, it's make the story much more cuter. Please continue writing, ne. Ja ne.
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is beautiful. It's probably the best Severus/Harry I've ever read, and I've read a lot. The character development is perfect. And I have to say that I loved the last line, about swans mating for life. It was just so cute.
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have to say I was so glad to get to finish this. I lost my computer and so I lost all the stories I had started and had to start finding them and when I found this one agian I started over from the beginning. I enjoyed it as much as the first time and really enjoyed the other ten chapters that brought it to an end. Way to go.
K.
person Nubby
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is such a beautiful end to a beutiful story, mi luv, xxxx
person Aqua
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I have no words. That was just such a perfect ending. your an amazing writer.
person thalia
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely lovely. Thank you for sharing your talent.
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, it is 2.30 am and I just finished reading your story... in one go... 11 hours or so (had to stop for eating and such, but otherwise...) I have to congratulate you on this story. It's really wonderfully written and quite original. I enjoyed it greatly - why else would I be still awake? Good job! I hop e to read more of you, soon.

Mel
person jean
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you. i enjoyed this story very much and look forward to more of your work.
person Leentjef
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this was amazing,
this is one of the best stories i have read,
and belief me i have read manny story over the past
3 years.
wow and thank you for this fantastic story, i hope you write
a new one. so i can also read it.
keep writing :)
bye bye