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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!!it is an amazing story and i have to say you have a lot of talent, my sister moonlight_guardian says she loves it 2 since she was reading it with me and hopes you update soon, though my other sister fallen_gaia is just hating cause she's a homphobic bitch, i dont get y since were triplets and moony n me dont really have anything against it. sorry, im talking 2 much....i love it and hope u update soon!dont let any haters bring you down!!!=]
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooo! Bad wearwolves!
Well done with the story so far, it's fabulous. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see what will happen with the whole surrounded situation. Keep up the brilliant work! xxxx
Well done with the story so far, it's fabulous. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see what will happen with the whole surrounded situation. Keep up the brilliant work! xxxx
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was fast. Intereasting use of poridge. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to the wizarding world! xx Keep up the exelent work!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a fairy godmother, right? Because I wished for a new chapter of this story, and now I look, and here it is! And it is wonderful like always.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww...such a sweet chap. I loved it. I'm still wondering what Sev will say to Dumbledore once he returns to Hogwarts lol That'll be an interesting chapter lol "Sorry, Albus, but he was a gift. How could I refuse?" lol Looking forward to the next chap. I'm loving this fic.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was such sweet relief and pleasure after the more harrowing aspects of the previous chapter. You handled the consequences of Severus' behaviour really well, and it seems to have acted as a catalyst for change. This is so exciting! I can't wait to see how they continue to redefine their relationship. And in front of Dumbledore too?! Heee...
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It has an amazing plot and you write it out really good. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will write it out and I have a feeling that Farid is Harry Potter. The flashback when he was found by the vampires made think that.
Update soon but not too soon dont want to rush you.
Update soon but not too soon dont want to rush you.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how seductive you make the dark side, and how it is not sometimes a conscious step but a deceptively easy slide. I do wonder how Severus will behave and treat Farid back at Hogwarts and what form the master-slave dynamic will take? Very interesting!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a gorgeous update. It explained Severus' initial behaviour and answered many questions regarding Harry. And it was sensually smokin'.
Harry's behaviour is heart-breakingly sweet and he gives so quickly and trustingly. I wonder how many chapters in will take Severus to come to a similar conclusion? I really look forward to seeing how and what this master-slave dynamic settles into.
Harry's behaviour is heart-breakingly sweet and he gives so quickly and trustingly. I wonder how many chapters in will take Severus to come to a similar conclusion? I really look forward to seeing how and what this master-slave dynamic settles into.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow yay! I'm loving this, its really well written and i love the whole story line so far! I can't wait until you update!