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by Lucie

person Ashley
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow!I love this story. i cant wait to see severus's reaction when he finds out farid is harry potter. keep updating soon please.
person vampchic
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I loved this set of updates. I'm so looking forward to reading more.
person miku
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Harry. Well done with this chapter. Loved the misunderstandings between Snape and Harry. xxx
person maria joao
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wwwwwoooooooooowwwwwwwwww..love it soo much .... please continue
person l'etje
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this s a very very good story keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Butterbutt
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 6- This is so beautiful and sweet, I can't even begin to describe how wonderful it is. Its driving me nuts that I can't put into words what makes this fic so lovely. The angst is sweet and human and it doesn't hurt my heart like dark slave-fics do even though the darkness is there and very real. I loove this fic.
person seres_mimosa
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Three chapter in a row, you're spoiling us terribly - and we thank you very much for it!

They were three action packed chapters too! Warewolves, Shopping and Albus, Oh My! I really like how you went from Harry's courage and heroic victory against the warewolves to his hilarious helplessness and failure at shopping. But best oll was his funny, bittersweet and wonderful meeting with Albus - I shall always remember Harry/Farid's opening introduction line - I almost choked! But my absolute favourite thing is that chapter 9 marks another great meeting, more important than even Albus ... Harry/Farid has now finally met Severus legendary short temper!! (*snickers* at Albus inspired scolding of Severus' "irascible nature")
person vyator
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the new chapter!! Thank you so much for updating so fast! It's fantastic!!
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed the last few chapters and can't wait to see more of them. way to go.
K.
person vyator
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Soo cool! Can't wait until the next chapter to find out what happens to them!!