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by Lucie

person l'etje
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow very very very good keep going and post
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person Pimpshit
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! i fucking LOVE this story! I can never wait till the next chapter gets up! It's just to good to want to wait! ^_~
person hera's child
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for posting!!!!!
person l'etje
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
person AkaneIkeda
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so lovely, I can't believe it... I've read every part more than 4 times and it still is sooo wonderful!
Thanks for the story, hope you update the next chapter soon!

Love, AI!
person maria joao
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GODDD........LOVE IT SO MUCH
person tamachan444
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it. update soon
person ode
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one of the best stories i've read so far!!!!
person seres_mimosa
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last three chapters. I love how flawed and needy and honorable Severus is. I loved the brief insight into Dumbledore and Severu's relationship. Most of all I love the wonderful devotion and love between Harry and Severus.

But I hate(joking) that evil twist in chapter 11 where a golden opportunity to discover 'Harry Potter' is lost ... because the suspense is going to kill me!! (admittedly in a really good way :)
person chibifae
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really cool. i love the way u are writing this.