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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am thinking along the same lones as Minue a few reviews up ... Serverus does forget Harry's pleasure a lot. He seems to take a huge amount. In a way it's keeping Harry the slave and docile thing that Yusef made him..
As for Black... Let the Gryfindor's at him at least lol.
As for Black... Let the Gryfindor's at him at least lol.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 20 - An intriguing AU. The personalities and character development are extremely detailed. The sex is very well done. More soon please.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, Severus forgets Farid's pleasure a lot. Always when he is distressed he forgets to tell Farid to get hard, I wonder what Farid thinks about that. It makes Severus rather selfish in my opinion. It's good to know Farid's friends stand by him. I worry about Sirius though, he is an idiot. A selfish, conceited idiot too.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I sure did miss alot. Haven't been able to read any of the updates in forever. Though this was certainly a pleasing update lol. Love it. Everyone know's now. I just wonder how everyone will react to him now. His friends...Draco...I hope that they'll accept him. I'm really looking forward to the next update. I'm eager for more. ^^
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god.. loved it so much..please continue
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story :D
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMM very good keep going and post ;)
bye bye
bye bye
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, great confrontatation between Seberus and Sirius. I could hear the screaming and the spittle flying, it was so good. I have missed having a Sirius to hate (on Severus' behalf :)
Plots-wise, I love everywhere you take this story. The climactic revelation was so much better with all the suspense and drama slowly built up. And I eagerly look forward to where you take this now, with so many secrets spilled.
And THANK YOU!! because it would be criminal to take how fast you gift us with updates for granted! So THANK YOU!!
Plots-wise, I love everywhere you take this story. The climactic revelation was so much better with all the suspense and drama slowly built up. And I eagerly look forward to where you take this now, with so many secrets spilled.
And THANK YOU!! because it would be criminal to take how fast you gift us with updates for granted! So THANK YOU!!