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by Lucie

person HazelWolf
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Would you please put bottom!name in the summary or warnings, because I don't read fics in this pairing that don't explicitly state dom!Harry (since they tend towards the other nearly exclusively), so I was just wondering if I'm missing out on something I would enjoy.
person Jan
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I have said this one to many time, please, please update soon, pleas^_^ I just love this story.
person seres_mimosa
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed out loud when right after concerned 'fussing' about Harry's sexual actvities, Hermione started solicitating Harry's sexual training experience. Harry's comment about Ron just topped it off! So funny and adorable!

I really love where you've taken the story in regards to Severus' conflicted desires for Harry. I really look forward to seeing how you resolve the issue (without Severus becoming a saint or having a nervous breakdown! *heh*)

But most immediately I want to know what happens after the cliffy!
person Ashley
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well...all i can say is;ts about time someone hit black, he had it comming. I just keep loving this story more every time i read a new chapter. id tell you to update,but im not sure i want you to. the more you update the closer the storhy is to being done. oh well ill just have to live. UPDATE!!!!!!!!
person seres_mimosa
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really good bit of love-making and levity makes the world seem like a much better place :)
person maria joao
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looooovvvvvvvvve ittttt.....
person momoko
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I like what happened to sirius
person maria joao
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o_O love it..please continue
person l'etje
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very very good wow i love this story
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Marille
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first I was "Yes!" then it was "Ohh..."
It's good to see that Serverus understands it all a bit better now but from his point I would want to know I wanted Farid that much because I loved him, not because a bond was affecting me. As for Harry/Farid saying no... Well he might not understand it all, especially freedom, but hell, how's he gonna help fight for freedom from the dark lord if he dosen't understand freedom himself? Voldy is just another vicious master, just like Yusef :-/