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by nolittlepotters

schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If no one else has yet asked to finish this story, i would like to take on the responsibility if it is not too much to ask.
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well you lost me as a reader when you made harry a slave to snape and lupin. i like dominant harry not submisive.
person HPFAN88
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far but i wish you could update soon.
person Wendy
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Poor Harry is gonna be in a pickle! I just hope that the minstry of magic can learn to leave him alone.
Please write more soon as I would love to know what happens to poor Harry in his bid to survive in his new role... (I also hope that his new 'friends' treat him well.)
person Trecklar
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well in Chapter one you started so well. then you HAD to get Harry bonded to Snape.

Dolores Umbridge would have been better.
person Trecklar
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you sure picked a hell of a place to end the chapter. Update soon please
person blaze
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start i think i will like this one so keep up the work and post soon