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for The New Me

by LoveGD

schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay... Draco is normally a top. But of course Harry freaks at being a bottom, ya know cause of all the scary stuff. So uhmm... you're the writer, that was just an idea. * Hearts forever*
person Riddick
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Poor Harry can't seem to get a break can he? I can't wait to see where you go from here, especially where the founders are involved. Keep up the great work and please post again soon.
person xhedwigx
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that so neat, also I think as you have put Harry like he's grown more confident I think he is the Top. Can't wait for the next chapter(s)
person Althea
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah! HARRY!
~Misery
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 18! How much did Remus see when he touched Harry or was he lucky and saw nothing?
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cliffie, cliffie, cliffie! How evil! :) Will wait for more!! :)
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think draco should top to show harry that it can be plesulabre on the bottom also he should be the one to take care of harry a be his protector draco surely seem like the only one chalenging harry enough to not give up if harry finds himself worltless
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now this story has kept my attention. I really enjoyed all chapters and I could not wait at the end of any to start the next. As for who is top/bottom. I think Harry must be top at first, to ease into the emotions that will hit him. But...I do believe that Draco will have to have his time on top as well...8)~
person NightLo
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually that particular question will wait until Harry is fully healed - emotionally, psychologically and mentally...However, since Harry has been abused for a too long time (ten years or more, right?), his mind has been totally damaged, as you have pointed and written for us (it is really horrible to read, mind me)...most important of all, Harry may not believe he is worth to be loved and cherished - in this case, any sexual act would only be sex or escape...no matter who's top or bottom...so it is really better to have Draco showing him love and he is worthy of love...and the scars...even in love, Harry would be afraid of being rejected by that - Draco must work hard on that before topping or bottoming...

I would say...better depend on the mood. With a very hurt Harry, he would become very submissive as his nightmare of the past would still taunt him. However, in a revengeful mood, this will work otherwise...still we will stand by your decision!
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. It is a mix of all my favorite fanfic elements. Personally I want Harry to be top. Partially because I think after everything he went through being submissive (especially to someone so similar in appearance to his first rapist) would be unlikely (especially during his first time following the abuse). Sometimes a bottom abused Harry works but your Harry doesn't seem the type to me. I also just prefer DomHarry. I will still love the story either way so feel free to ignore me. I'm going to shut up now. Can't wait until the next chapter!