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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it and hope to see an update soon
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it and hope to see an update soon
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, Ill keep my eyes open for updates
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello I like the story and was wondering if you could e-mail me when you update so I know to come look?! MORE SOON please!
~shadow
~shadow
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I feel all sad and heartbroken for Draco!! Poor Harry and the horriable things that happened to him :(
Keep up the writing, this is one of only a couple of stories I have kept up with in recent months. Love how it is progressing
Keep up the writing, this is one of only a couple of stories I have kept up with in recent months. Love how it is progressing
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed with the caliber of your story!!! And, oh my, I am waaay ready to find out what happens next!! How will Draco and Harry finally come together? What will happen to Hermione?? And will Dumbledore's annoying meddling finally be stopped?! Haha, I absolutely love the 'new' Harry and Hermione; I'll be checking this site even more than usual just to get the update!
Keep up the good work, and if you plan on writing other stories, let me know!!! I would love to read them, or even Beta them, if you don't already have a Beta. Again, kudos on the awesome beginning, can't wait to see what kind of magic you'll think of next!
K.
Keep up the good work, and if you plan on writing other stories, let me know!!! I would love to read them, or even Beta them, if you don't already have a Beta. Again, kudos on the awesome beginning, can't wait to see what kind of magic you'll think of next!
K.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just now starting this story (I think you've got 15 chapters up, so I'll have to catch up) and I'm posting my reactions as I read the chapters, so apologies for the long-ass review.
Chapter 1--holy shit! A KNIFE???? That is so fucking twisted, and you are AWESOME for writing it!
Chapter 4--YAY Draco!!! And their arguing is SOOO pointless...we know they want each other! haha And Harry doing Tai Chi and karate??? What, TaeKwon-Do isn't good enough for the Savior of the Wizarding World?? (just kidding, just kidding; I love Tai Chi...but I do TKD, and that's what works best for me...just had to tease you, though)
Chapter 5--YESS! That means Harry listens to Disturbed! (my favorite band of all time!) And what's "wotcher"?
Chapter 6--haha Harry got glared at by a HAT! (and then he proceeded to take said hat and give it the magical equivalent of a "roundhouse kick to the face"!)
Chapter 7--GET DRACO TO HELP HIM!!!! GO DRACO GO!!! HARRY NEEDS YOU!!! (fucking cliff-hanger)
Chapter 8--OMFG "Do you actually have something worth attention to say, or are you just talking to hear your own voice again?" Them's fucking words! (as in "fighting words"...only with Harry and Draco, fighting leads to fucking...and that's the way, uh huh uh huh, we like it.)
Chapter 9--oh god! Draco in tight black pants *drool* And Draco + Linkin Park...I have to wipe my keyboard off! Hufflepuffs to the infirmary....LMAO
Chapter 10--OH MY HOLY FUCKING GOD!!!! IT WAS LUCIUS AND...AND....DUMBLEDORE???? OH GOD NO!!!! I didn't think I could still be shocked/awed/horrified, since I'm pretty dark and twisted myself. Bravo you!!!
Chapter 11--oh, phew! Not Dumbledore!
Chapter 12--Verie Nosey? hahahahahaha Cute. Hmmm, Harry's the Lord of Slytherin, and Draco's the Slytherin Prince....in terms of "royalty terminology" wouldn't that make Draco under Harry??? Mmmmmmm, now THERE's a yummy thought! Yay, a unicorn! For Draco...I was expecting either Dragon or Ferret..*giggle* And Harry is a winged wolf? *raises eyebrow* Wait, what's this "attack" he's having? A werewolf attack?
Chapter 14--HAHAHAHA Draco the drama queen! And Hermione asking Harry if he's gay, right in the middle of dinner? Seriously, that is TOTALLY Gryffindor, and she's supposed to be Slytherin! Bad form, young lady! That aside, POOR HARRY! I JUST WANT DRACO TO HUG HIM AND MAKE IT BETTER!
Chapter 15--DAMN no more chaptes to read!!! I need more!
Okay, a couple of quick things: "passed" is a verb..."past" is an adjective or a noun, but pretty much any time you meant "past" you spelled it "passed"...just a note (and it bugged me...sorry).
Also, when Harry punched Draco in the stomach, I would've thought that would've gotten more of a reaction from Hermione, being a survivor of domestic abuse herself (well, Harry too, but generally, victims respond one of two ways: they either become abusers themselves--as Harry seems to be doing--or else they don't want anything to do with violence--like Hermione seems to be.) So that makes me think that Hermione would've protested more, citing her helplessness at Ron's hands and something about "never wishing that on anyone, not even your worst enemy"...or I would think it would have scared her more than it did, since Ron beat her and now Harry acted like an abuser to Draco (and hopefully that won't be an indicator of their future relationship!)
Violent sex can be kinky, but there's NOTHING cool about domestic abuse! As for who Hermione should end up with...what about Nott from Slytherin? Or maybe Crabbe or Goyle? (haha the irony of that...she'd be helping them through their classes!) OR you could have her fall in love with a Ravenclaw and be re-sorted (again!) into Ravenclaw to be with her new love, and Harry is okay with it because he has Draco...and they will still be brother and sister, but Harry doesn't "need" her as much anymore because he has Draco, and she doesn't "need" him to protect her anymore since she has a new Ravenclaw!
Okay, WOW I ramble too much!
Chapter 1--holy shit! A KNIFE???? That is so fucking twisted, and you are AWESOME for writing it!
Chapter 4--YAY Draco!!! And their arguing is SOOO pointless...we know they want each other! haha And Harry doing Tai Chi and karate??? What, TaeKwon-Do isn't good enough for the Savior of the Wizarding World?? (just kidding, just kidding; I love Tai Chi...but I do TKD, and that's what works best for me...just had to tease you, though)
Chapter 5--YESS! That means Harry listens to Disturbed! (my favorite band of all time!) And what's "wotcher"?
Chapter 6--haha Harry got glared at by a HAT! (and then he proceeded to take said hat and give it the magical equivalent of a "roundhouse kick to the face"!)
Chapter 7--GET DRACO TO HELP HIM!!!! GO DRACO GO!!! HARRY NEEDS YOU!!! (fucking cliff-hanger)
Chapter 8--OMFG "Do you actually have something worth attention to say, or are you just talking to hear your own voice again?" Them's fucking words! (as in "fighting words"...only with Harry and Draco, fighting leads to fucking...and that's the way, uh huh uh huh, we like it.)
Chapter 9--oh god! Draco in tight black pants *drool* And Draco + Linkin Park...I have to wipe my keyboard off! Hufflepuffs to the infirmary....LMAO
Chapter 10--OH MY HOLY FUCKING GOD!!!! IT WAS LUCIUS AND...AND....DUMBLEDORE???? OH GOD NO!!!! I didn't think I could still be shocked/awed/horrified, since I'm pretty dark and twisted myself. Bravo you!!!
Chapter 11--oh, phew! Not Dumbledore!
Chapter 12--Verie Nosey? hahahahahaha Cute. Hmmm, Harry's the Lord of Slytherin, and Draco's the Slytherin Prince....in terms of "royalty terminology" wouldn't that make Draco under Harry??? Mmmmmmm, now THERE's a yummy thought! Yay, a unicorn! For Draco...I was expecting either Dragon or Ferret..*giggle* And Harry is a winged wolf? *raises eyebrow* Wait, what's this "attack" he's having? A werewolf attack?
Chapter 14--HAHAHAHA Draco the drama queen! And Hermione asking Harry if he's gay, right in the middle of dinner? Seriously, that is TOTALLY Gryffindor, and she's supposed to be Slytherin! Bad form, young lady! That aside, POOR HARRY! I JUST WANT DRACO TO HUG HIM AND MAKE IT BETTER!
Chapter 15--DAMN no more chaptes to read!!! I need more!
Okay, a couple of quick things: "passed" is a verb..."past" is an adjective or a noun, but pretty much any time you meant "past" you spelled it "passed"...just a note (and it bugged me...sorry).
Also, when Harry punched Draco in the stomach, I would've thought that would've gotten more of a reaction from Hermione, being a survivor of domestic abuse herself (well, Harry too, but generally, victims respond one of two ways: they either become abusers themselves--as Harry seems to be doing--or else they don't want anything to do with violence--like Hermione seems to be.) So that makes me think that Hermione would've protested more, citing her helplessness at Ron's hands and something about "never wishing that on anyone, not even your worst enemy"...or I would think it would have scared her more than it did, since Ron beat her and now Harry acted like an abuser to Draco (and hopefully that won't be an indicator of their future relationship!)
Violent sex can be kinky, but there's NOTHING cool about domestic abuse! As for who Hermione should end up with...what about Nott from Slytherin? Or maybe Crabbe or Goyle? (haha the irony of that...she'd be helping them through their classes!) OR you could have her fall in love with a Ravenclaw and be re-sorted (again!) into Ravenclaw to be with her new love, and Harry is okay with it because he has Draco...and they will still be brother and sister, but Harry doesn't "need" her as much anymore because he has Draco, and she doesn't "need" him to protect her anymore since she has a new Ravenclaw!
Okay, WOW I ramble too much!
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i highly dislike harry/dracos.but this story is good.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was beginning to think I'd have to find a group of readers like myself to send out a search party looking for you. (lol) Just kidding, the chapter really is great. Be careful though with your spelling and grammar. As well as synonyms.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! Definately loving this. The tension is great. Adding Vernon's screwed over ideas gives a lot of point to Harry's reactions. Poor screwed up kid. And I love the transformations as a top off, great way to end things for the chapter.
Update again soon!
Update again soon!