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for It Happened One Hallow's Eve

by Ms_Figg

person Chavela
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Two of my favorite things. Halloween and your writing. LOL!

This is more exciting, since it is on my favorite night of the year. And I love the plot! SO GREAT!

PEACE♥
person firewall
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - Yippee! A Hallowe'en story from Ms Figg! Who could ask for anything more!?
person jmac
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh how fun. lets get to the deflowering
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Queen: For this Halloween story Severus may seem a bit ooc, but the way the wizard is acting most likely is because he is quite attracted to Hermione and the idea of her being killed by rabid ghosts before he can get his hands (or appropriate body parts) on her made him blow a torch. Others notice he's acting strangely as well, particularly Harry...so he is ooc within the storyline...if that makes sense. "Why is he reacting like this?" is mostly likely the question of the day on the Hogwarts Express. This doesn't mean he is out of character totally, but for the situation. Actually collaring Harry is not normal for the wizard. Browbeating him, being sarcastic and downright nasty, yes...but putting his hands on him physically, no. But his reaction is necessary for the storyline. Hm. Maybe I should add an ooc to the story details. Thanks for the question.
person Kris
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh noez Oh noez. Love the plot, cant wait for more! XD
person angel
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a great start .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person lisa
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. quite interesting. I love it a great excuse for a little Severus and Hermione action lol. Love it Update soon please. more more more please. Just in time for Halloween lol. I do hope they find the protective circe soon. Poor Severus a tough job but somebody's got to do it. and Severus always does it right lol.Can't wait to see what happens next.
person raeia
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent begining!
person SGF
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great idea for a story, and nice halloween theme. Please post another chapter!