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for It Happened One Hallow's Eve

by Ms_Figg

schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person firewall
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL Ms Figg, I certainly hope you don't think I was complaining!!!?? I love your descriptive passages of in-outie! You take it to a level beyond all others! Mind you I'm now snorting after reading the "Let's get physical" comments. You give it all to us, lemons and sly humour. Fantastic.
person lisa
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definitely awwwww. that was so sweet. and yay Hermione she got what she wanted but stil Severus is very discplined. and I agree he's gonna have a hard time taming her. lol goodluck to Severus he's gonna need it. She's already planning and seems good at getting to his weak point. I can't wait to see what happens next. and I think it's sweet she's already thinking of being wiht him and him alone for always. More more more please. Update soon please.
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Firewall: Yes, this Severus is very sweet behind closed doors, but then again he really wants Hermione for himself. He's a Slytherin. If he has to pour on the sweetness to get her, he will. Victory by any means necessary. I actually think he is a kind of backlash from writing two stories at once and being at the point of lemons in both of them, and one Severus was "good" and one was "bad." Maybe just a touch of overcompensation for writing such a harsh Severus in "Ficlet" And he really is super harsh. But it was interesting writing them both at the same time, having to change my mindset for each while the other was still in my mind. They are almost diameterically opposed. At least to me. Thanks for the review.
person PAMELA WILLIAMS
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really do like this story. Sev's being sweet is nice once in a while. Please post again soon. Thanks.
person angel
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ man .... that was hreat i love it ... does he really think it will be easy to tame her .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person angel
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow the was great ...please please please please please please please please please please please please more ... later for now

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person anya
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Considerate Severus is my favourite!
person firewall
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 LOL you sure know how to write every single little detail of the in-outie, don't you? LOL
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Firewall: Lol. I know I overdo it sometimes, girl. :::g:::. But when there's this much sexual tension between them it just does something to me ... it's like "Nooooo, it's about to be resolved". I really get off on the two wanting each other and trying to fight it, so when they do get together I think after all that waiting, they deserve more than a paragraph or two. I enjoy the pre-sex interaction, plus I get to stay titilated(? for spelling)for a little longer before the dirty deed is actually done. lol. I think I really do write these stories primarily for myself then just share them. Talk about living vicariously :::shakes head::: Oh, to be Hermione. Siiiiigh.