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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you've just written the unpublishable first chapter to book seven. I was almost expecting Harry to be in the bed across the room, like so many other Hermione three way stories. But I'm glad you stayed so in character, it's refreshing. Maybe next time they will be playing the 'can we have sex without the roommate noticing' game. I remember that one from college. It's fun.
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i just had to say that this is really an incredible story. I don't really come across a lot of ron/hermione stories, and never one written this well. i prefer draco/ginny, but this was pretty damn good! are you planning on writing any more to this?
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're right. R/H fics are few and far between so I'm glad to have found this one. Be sure to keep writing.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good fic. There were a few OC moments their, and one or two awkward sentences, but other than that, this is more or less what I would imagine a lemon chapter by JKR would be like. Any chance of a Harry/Ginny scene anytime soon? Sorry, I'm a OBHWF shipper, so I'm a sucker for the whole HG thing.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can only agree with what the first reviewer said: This is exactly how the first time is supposed to be. It should be like that for everyone. You've not only created a good and realistic plotline, but I was also impressed by your language. And a few words about the person who took your story and
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shit. I forget to change one sentence.
She put her hand over his mouth and shushed him.
She put her hand over his mouth and shushed him.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In a word - Brilliant. :)
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an AMAZING story!
It is just the way their first time is supposed to be
I really liked the slow and sensualness of it, it was very passionate and sexy
I liked it a lot
Congratulations on writing such a BRILLIANT story!
Have you put this story in the Ron/Hermione story section?
You will get many well-deserved reviews
Until next time my talented writer
Love TiffANY
It is just the way their first time is supposed to be
I really liked the slow and sensualness of it, it was very passionate and sexy
I liked it a lot
Congratulations on writing such a BRILLIANT story!
Have you put this story in the Ron/Hermione story section?
You will get many well-deserved reviews
Until next time my talented writer
Love TiffANY
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry forgot to give you a smiley face :)