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for Mmm Mmm Good

by roxierose13

person alyxanderson
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's done? but i wanna find out hermione's reaction, we all know that she'll figure it out!
person madlodger
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 4
That was wonderful, very enjoyable. Interesting plot and some good humor. All characters are in character.

Good job, roxierose13:D

As for your question about long, detailed fics or short, oneshots I can only tell you that different stories command different lengths. Does that make any sense? Some ideas need more chapters for the best execution, some less. 'Mmm Mmm Good ' was wonderfull, so is 'A Business Affair'. Wright whatever feels right TO YOU. One thing, though, I am not partial to short one-shots, but that is only my own preference.

Thank you for writing, roxi, hope to read more of your fics in the future.
person Potter's Wifey
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. That was hot. It looks like the beginning of a beautiful relationship.
person Kermit
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story, I hope you write more.
person Anyanka
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the end is wonderful as it's, but of course I wouldn't say no to a short sequel^^
person vibora
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! :) update soon! this is so good!
person vibora
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great! ^_^
person ShadowyThunder
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's chapter 4???
person zion
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really hot! Well written too. Hurry up and let us have the next chapter! :)
person Kayo
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! UPDATE! SOON! I like where this is headed as well as the chapters so far. Out of curiosity, is Draco's behavior in any way related to his sickness? ....I suppose the next chapter will tell?