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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should let Hermione and Snape play. Let Lucius watch. I wonder how he'll react?
Make Hermione scream like no other. I'm a big fan of Lucius and Hermione, but sometimes he's to stubborn. Why not make him suffer a little by watching his master and bestfriend have fun while he is watching them do things Hermione and him haven't done before? I bet you anything he'll feel something, I hope. Update soon. I rather Hermione and Lucius. They are one of my favorite couples.
Make Hermione scream like no other. I'm a big fan of Lucius and Hermione, but sometimes he's to stubborn. Why not make him suffer a little by watching his master and bestfriend have fun while he is watching them do things Hermione and him haven't done before? I bet you anything he'll feel something, I hope. Update soon. I rather Hermione and Lucius. They are one of my favorite couples.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH! What a wonderful opening. And lucky Hermione not only does she always end up with Lucius or Draco, now she is gonna get Narcissa!
Great start! I love it!
PEACE♥
Great start! I love it!
PEACE♥
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2!
Well I am glad to hear that this just came over, GAH! I am really enjoying this already. It is amazing how fast I have come to love this fic already. With most of your fics, I usually have to wait for a few chapters before I am hooked, but this one is damn great. I love how Sev is just pretty much okay with this, and it would be Lucius who has the problem. LOL!
I think that Narcissa and Hermione being lovers is a really nice change. You dont see that much, and it seems everyone forgets how beautiful Narcissa is and disregards her in stories.
And Lucius, I liek his private thoughts, his reluctance to even admit to himself that he is disappointed to want to be with her, and she not with him. Already. Now, that is entertaining.
I can not wait for you to continue this.
And I am glad that you are gonna update MR. But what about that awesome Draco/Hermione you started. It was such a great start. Another one of yours that I liked from the start. And it also seemed that the Snape/Ginny one could be interesting too. Even though I do not like them, it is the sequel... so I want to read it, LOL!
I hope you plan to start updating those as well!
PEACE♥
Isa
Well I am glad to hear that this just came over, GAH! I am really enjoying this already. It is amazing how fast I have come to love this fic already. With most of your fics, I usually have to wait for a few chapters before I am hooked, but this one is damn great. I love how Sev is just pretty much okay with this, and it would be Lucius who has the problem. LOL!
I think that Narcissa and Hermione being lovers is a really nice change. You dont see that much, and it seems everyone forgets how beautiful Narcissa is and disregards her in stories.
And Lucius, I liek his private thoughts, his reluctance to even admit to himself that he is disappointed to want to be with her, and she not with him. Already. Now, that is entertaining.
I can not wait for you to continue this.
And I am glad that you are gonna update MR. But what about that awesome Draco/Hermione you started. It was such a great start. Another one of yours that I liked from the start. And it also seemed that the Snape/Ginny one could be interesting too. Even though I do not like them, it is the sequel... so I want to read it, LOL!
I hope you plan to start updating those as well!
PEACE♥
Isa
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! I was beginnig to think that I am the only one totaly fed up with submissive women. Stories like yours are a welcome change in the fandom that gets more and more boring and stereotype. You just made my day, please make the next as well and update quickly!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheh bravo! lol love it so far, gotta love a leather clad Mione and a curse bound lucius yumyumyumyum!! I think abit of femslash is ok :D if it helps get the four of them together hehe
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read chapter 1 and am very interested in seeing Lucius and Severus in their dungeon apartment, beholden to Hermione and Narcissa. But probably because she is such a minor character so far in the films and even in the books, Narcissa is rather a non-entity to me. And I'm indifferent to the world of Sappho as a rule. So, to make this long story short(er) I'll be interested in the trials and tribulations of the "boys" much more than the "girls".
So, bring on the leather and Lucius and Severus!
So, bring on the leather and Lucius and Severus!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I very much like were this story is heading as of ch. 2. Please continue! I love FemDom w/o S/M.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome ..ilove it and poor lucius he had feeling for mione ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do like Severus' prosaic attitude toward his captivity. It seems like something he might do, especially if he knew he was getting a beautiful woman to make love to every so often. And he already seems to like Narcissa as a person, rather than just a free f**k.
Lucius pouting? Hmmm.
I laughed at the line,
Lucius pouting? Hmmm.
I laughed at the line,