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by Marti

person angel
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow so that is what really happen that night .. man .. i cant weait in till the next update ... have a safe ,happy and fun halloween .. later for now

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person angel
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man.. hope sre they going to find her or is she going to find them ..please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Beck
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

Great Story im hooked! keep on writting i really want to see how this goes.
person angel
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. i hope she can get the help she needs there .. please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person angel
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. hmm do you think that sev scared the healer .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update son i would love to read more .. im sorry to read what one of your kids did .. later for now

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person LVanna
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so getting into this story. I have not seen this particular plot done this way before....I think I'm jealous (damn why didn't I think of it!) :)
Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter!!
person Kris
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ootz, cant wait for more!
person Kiwi
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! - Woman - you're a brilliant write... one really feels the pain and everything *bows down* Thank you for putting your talented thoughts on paper
person Dork Fish
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really fabulous story! I applaud you for writing a poignant, heart-wrenching story when so many are based purely on sexual interludes between characters. I am enjoying your creation immensely - as much as one can enjoy such saddness!lol Keep up the great job!
person Kris
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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