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by Marti

person juls
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, dunno if I reviewed this one yet or not, but wanted to say I loved this chapter. I'm glad Hermione is getting back to her life now. huggles juls
person juls
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful chapter, a lemon like doesn't pucker but is sweet and hot. Keep up the good work =)
person angel
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah mione is back ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

angel
person lisa
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww omg she's home and Severus and Tristyn have her back. that was soooo sweet and heart wrenching. Severus acts like he truly loves her. And he's such a good father. and lil tristyn is so cute. I cant help but think Hermione will fall in love with her daughter quickly and realize what she has and not let it go. good chappies. more more more please update soon please.
person angel
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was wow ... im glad they took that step .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon ... later for now

angel
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Brilliant!!! Such a wonderful story!!! It is so refreshing to read a story with such great emotional substance! I heartily applaud you!!! I admit I am guilty of often reading the lemon filled variety, so this story has been just fantastic!!! Not that I won't love the up coming lemons you've promised!!!lol I'm just kinda speechless... I really dread this wonderful work ending! I hope you can find the time to write another. You have such talent!!! I really appreciate the time you sacrifice to bring me a little ecscape from real life. I suspect it's a bit of an escape for you as well! Again, A marvelous job you are doing and can't wait for an update!!! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K :D
person angel
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man tristyn is something els .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon..later for now

angel
person Barbara
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another two chapters, great!!! I laughed picturing Severus landing in the rose bushes. I am still anxiously awaiting the reuniting of the family.
person Citten
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay i finally caught up with the story and i must say that i just love it! bigger time gaps then i usually like but you have done it so well that well it speaks for its self. i do hope that you have another chapter up soon enough because face it you have the most cruelest sense of intermission and leaving us hanging!! :)
person Sampdoria
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and your quick updates, but I want more!!!!! I want Hermione back and for them to be a family!
Do you have any ideas on how many chapters there will be in total before the story is completed?