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by Marti

person lisa
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!!! That was such a nice homecoming and I am so glad they are together again. Maybe finally they can be a family and Severus can be happy. and Tristyn finally has a mummy. so sweet. I reallly loved this story. Can't wait for the epilouge, Please update it soon.
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is perfect.
person Joani
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update again! ~Joani
person lisa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!!!! Yay!!!!! thanks for them lemons. Loved them. That was so nice. A bit rushed but nice. I do love them together. please update soon.
person Citten
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooohhhh! that was so cute and precious that i could just die! bytheway if you skip a lot in the next chapter/eplicelog i will be killing you instead. by this i mean no six year gap with tristyn going to hogwart no nine months later everyone waiting in the hospital etc. so now have a nice ending (with even a hint of a possible sequel would be even better!;))!
person Jessica
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe its almost over its such a good story
person Barbara
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Going to miss this story, it was great. Missed reading for 2 days and came home to 4 new chapters.
person angel
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~giggles~ that was awesome ... i love it i cant wait in till the next chapter .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Citten
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was sepectular and i am glad that it was longer and more detailed than you thaught it would be it made it all the better for it! i don't want it to end ether but if you do end it that soon please, please, PLEASE make it as long or longer and just as detailed as the last chapter then i will be happy or at least content. :)
person Ava Allen
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooo...please, don`t write the epiloque yet !!! I love stories, where they are married and have children. And you did very good job when you created this little girl. I love her questions : "How'd I get in my mummy's tummy?" :-)))
Please... write more..maybe sequel ???