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by Marti

person lisa
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! That was perfect. Just perfect. Lol Tristyn was something, just like her daddy. Awesome ending to an awesome story. Thanks so much for the mention. I hate to see it end but it was just perfect. Goodluck with the rest and perhaps you will do a sequel. Love your stories. Keep on writing, I'll keep reading lol.
person juls
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ending. Ahhhh romance. And rats...(sorry!)
person Citten
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay you are forgiven to some extent, it was a very great chapter and i do love the way it ended-BUT i really hated the gap. C'est la vie! well i do love the way it showed the feelings and the best part was "there rats, daddy!" too funny! well i do hope that you make a sequel someday soon, thought i do understand wanting or needing a break! be reading ya!:)
person Barbara
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad it had to end but laughed about the kittens. I can relate as I did the same thing as a small child but it was my hamster and watched her have babies and freaked.
person Beck
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great story that is nearly to an end *sniffs* but its great to see hermione back and healthy again.. sorry i havn't reviewed in ages i have been busy with exams and assignments....update soon please
person firewall
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue - Wonderful story! I enjoyed every chapter of it. LOL Tristyn is definitely an attention grabber. I rather enjoyed her.
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Simply beautiful!!! It was such a good ending, but I'm incredibly sad it's over!!! A sequel would be so great if you ever have time. Looking forward to more stories from you! Happy writing on whatever takes your fancy!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses,
Killer K <:}
person skydancer
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.... I soooo wanted to leave a profound, respectful, inteligent review.... and then Rover had rats! lol....Loved Severus' reaction to that! you did an amazing job with this story and you deserve all the wonderful chocolate frogs you can eat! skye
person angel
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was an awesome endding i love it .. and how tristyn actted there at the end ... man that was great .. later for now

angel
person Sarah
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the little girl is sooo cute!!!! i love this fic please finish it. I hope your little one is doing better, what with all the hospital stays. Those are never fun. :(