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by Marti

person Katie
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! great story!!! THANX
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear Marti, This story is outstanding. It is better than D Steele or N Roberts bodice rippers.You are good and that is before the lemons.
person DB1
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story I loved it!!!

*DB*
person gitana
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After more than three hours of reading your story all I have to say is one thing.... HELL YES!
person Stormi
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Looking forward to your next.
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. I hope you do a part 2
person hp4freek
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to tell you how fabulous I found this! I laughed, I cried, I did both at the same time! Great job!!
person msvanessa
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a very sweet ending! :D
person Beck
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh what a sweet ending. Do a sequel it would be good to see the family grow up and that. Great Story loved it!
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent job, and I liked the sibling jealously thing - very realistic. my own niece asked if she could have our old baby since we where having a new one!