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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to your return, and wish your son well.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thi is starting out to be a very good story,you've put alot of thought in ot so far and have really got Hermione going through all the thoughts and fellings of having a bad experience.I just hope Harry and Ron keep playing nice. I can't wait for more!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. What did Dumbledore mean when he was telling Severus that heSeverus) knew from experience and not to have Hermione descend into darkness like he did???
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the start, but could you please change the format, it is diffcult to read. Other than that I like it, it would be nice to get a bit more background on the situation but keep it up.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting....very interesting. id like to see where this goes! please keep on keepin on!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be the start of a good story, but it's very difficult to read. You really need to go in and edit the paragraphs. It reads like a poem structure. The sentences need to connect with the previous ones. Any way...its a good start.
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