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by Marti

person Angel
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marti,
Your story is absolutely brilliant. I love how you're planning to keep Hermione in her mental state longer. Things that traumatic take awhile to get over. It's a great story and I enjoy reading it. I know you don't write on it all the time but I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Besides with your story it's worth the wait. Thanks for the good story.
-Angel
person angel
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ..mione has lost it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person bobbie
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, this is an ok story so far,,,i wish you could make Hermione wake up and smell the coffee...lol..she needs to realize Snape actually saved her life,,the least she could do is give him and her daughter a chance,,they need her more then she realizes..
person angel
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. well i hope they find out that is harry's wand and get it back to him .... i hope she gets the help she needs soon .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person sunshyne
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like where you are taking this, more please!
person Barbara
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update, and I love that Severus wants to be a hands on dad especially after everything with Hermione. I really hope she gets the help and will want to become family with Severus and the baby.
person angel
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person septentrion
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my best wishes for your little one. He (or she) is more important than updates.
person Kathryn
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying your story and I wish you and your family well.