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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man those jerks really did a number over on Draco, didn't they? Here's hoping that karma works fast for them.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 23 - Amazing story. Great detail without overloading either the conversation or block presentation styles - nice mixture of techniques. Harry very believable as a solder who just can't let go of the war. The character development and the relationship progression was nicely paced.
More so please.
More so please.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sam, Draco is a genuinly believeable as you have created him. Is Ron going to be the next one to have "one off" in the shower and if so what will he be thinknig of? lol.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw geez, poor Draco! :( It's so sad that he can't accept himself. I'm wondering how he will do with Charlie and Doula. I'm hoping he'll see the beauty in love more than the thing he fears about himself. I'm worried he won't cope.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the vigilante Harry! Poor Draco! I really enjoy this story! Keep writing!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm addicted. enough said.
i love how you've made Harry have the traits of Voldermort when he hunts, i hope you are going to develope that more. i'm very glad draco isn't the sniviling fool he was before. besides the odvious and better changes in draco you've kept them pretty much in character :). i love how you made charlie and dula the way they are it makes it easier to get advice :).
Is Molly going through witch menopause? that's what it sounds like so far :).
please add me to your update list :) i really am addicted lol
i love how you've made Harry have the traits of Voldermort when he hunts, i hope you are going to develope that more. i'm very glad draco isn't the sniviling fool he was before. besides the odvious and better changes in draco you've kept them pretty much in character :). i love how you made charlie and dula the way they are it makes it easier to get advice :).
Is Molly going through witch menopause? that's what it sounds like so far :).
please add me to your update list :) i really am addicted lol
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sam, Draco is showing amazing development, I am still so throughly hooked!!! I'm also glad that you had Harry stay true and ask Ron to give Draco time to prove himself. These are good characters dealing with tough issues, you are handling it very maturly. Keep up the fantastic work!!!!!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron, I want to cry for him but man I hate drunks, lol.
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron! Then Draco overhears and has dark thoughts...
That was a bloody optimistic end of a chapter!!! Surprising...
Aaannnd, NEXT!!!
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That was a bloody optimistic end of a chapter!!! Surprising...
Aaannnd, NEXT!!!
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