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WAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god, poor Arthur! He thinks that Draco and Harry are

Good work on 46. You just weave the characters so well with their dialogue and actions. ^^

this was very very very good keep going and post soon
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Chapter 46

I can't even tell you how much I loved this chapter.

Beautiful, simply beautiful. The day and a half wait to the result of Harry's action was murderous, but I am more then satisfied by the result. You have a wonderful gift with this story.

A friend of mine introduced me to this great song. It's called "In This Together" by Apoptygma Berzerk. If you get a chance, I think you may like it. I was thinking alot about the song and this fic, and I think that your interpretations of Harry and Draco make the song work really well. The chorus always gets me when thinking of this fic. It goes, "Don't you see? We're in this together. You and me. One on one forever."

Anyways, keep up the good work, and I look forward to any other/new projects that might be cooking in your head.

In retrospect, I think it was a good idea to have Harry kill somebody who wasn't a deatheater and hadn't appeared in the story yet. It makes it very obvious that Harry is messed up far beyond a grudge against Voldemort's followers. His arrogance is worrisome. I wonder if his penchant for self justice is only because of the horcrux?

I have a question about Nymphadora Tonks. You wrote she is Remus' wife. Sorry if you wrote it before, but shouldn't she be called Nymphadora Lupin? It makes sense Harry and Ron still call her Tonks, but it seems to me it is still her name.

Harry is very wrong about Dracos honesty. What if he ever uses legilimency on him? I hope this wont come to haunt them.

Happy new year and thanks for your great story!

Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God!
I have read all the chapter so far and I am just blown away, what a lovely fic!!!!!
I hope you update soon!!! Please? How about I give you a cookie to feed your muse? [hands off a super-duper deluxe chocolate cookie]

I really hope you update soon, i can't wait to find out what happens next!
Happy Writing,
LemonLyman

fucking loved it

I really like this and it's quite the little highlight of my afternoon to pop on and see there's been a new chapter. Great characterisation, turning Draco into a nice person isn't a small job, if you want to keep it realistic and this was done very well.

What I most look forward too, is unravelling Harry's mystery!

I absolutely love your fic. Your writing is, for lack of a better word, exquisite. I have been reading it for a while, stumbled upon a site before this one, and I simply leap for joy when the next chapter is up. You are an amazing writer whose words flow seamlessly together. I love it. I sincerely hope that you continue to write more! Can't wait for the next update!!