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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. (I'm reading the newest chapters as you post them. I'm just not reviewing every single one. Because, y'know. I'm lazy.)
One thing that seems to set your story apart from many others is that it's not exclusively a romance. There's a plot beyond Draco and Harry wanting to get into each other's pants, and that's very refreshing. I mean, smut is all well and good, but it loses its charm when there's nothing worth noting in between.
I'm sort of tempted to do some art based off your story. Especially of Dula. He's an intriguing character. But I'd want your permission, of course, seeing as how it's your story and all. E-mail me if you're at all interested.
One thing that seems to set your story apart from many others is that it's not exclusively a romance. There's a plot beyond Draco and Harry wanting to get into each other's pants, and that's very refreshing. I mean, smut is all well and good, but it loses its charm when there's nothing worth noting in between.
I'm sort of tempted to do some art based off your story. Especially of Dula. He's an intriguing character. But I'd want your permission, of course, seeing as how it's your story and all. E-mail me if you're at all interested.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going and
post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it...
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 47
*Purrs* Is Harry going to do it whether Draco says yes or not? I think that seems like the kind of thing he'd do, especially since he's so hellbent on it being 'the right thing' for him to do.
*Purrs* Is Harry going to do it whether Draco says yes or not? I think that seems like the kind of thing he'd do, especially since he's so hellbent on it being 'the right thing' for him to do.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Harry. Draco's going to say no!! I can't wait for Harry to find out! Because we all know he will, it just just goes without saying. I hope you update soon!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...wow... :happy, swooning sigh: That kiss was the sweetest I have ever read! I always love it when one asks before kissing rather than a spontaneous moment. The patience and consideration and all that sap is so... :trails off, swooning again:\
You wrote that so perfectly! Lovely! I've been waiting for the moment for 30 plus chapters and it was well worth the wait. XD
Dula was wonderful again. Oo, I can just imagine that sexy accent of his. And his words of comfort was so SWEET! Damn it, Draco, you better cook that man a cake or something! =P and Charlie was hilarious yet again! His candid character is so fun!
Oh man, I should be sleeping...I got classes tomorrow...lots of errands to do...ah screw it. One more chapter. ^_~
You wrote that so perfectly! Lovely! I've been waiting for the moment for 30 plus chapters and it was well worth the wait. XD
Dula was wonderful again. Oo, I can just imagine that sexy accent of his. And his words of comfort was so SWEET! Damn it, Draco, you better cook that man a cake or something! =P and Charlie was hilarious yet again! His candid character is so fun!
Oh man, I should be sleeping...I got classes tomorrow...lots of errands to do...ah screw it. One more chapter. ^_~
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Frig it! I'm losing sleep over this story! I should have been in bed two chapters ago! But...story...too damn...good...can't stop...reading...
Okay, before I REALLY go to bed and stay there, there are three things I must address:
One, I love the twins. George and Fred with the ferret joke was so damn funny! And Draco's response--AHHHH! I squealed, really I did. I saw a spark of the ol' Malfoy we knew before and that provoked the Malfoy-fangirl in me. ^_^ I love the new and improved dcharacter you built upon him, of course, but I'm glad to see some of the original bite in him, too.
Two, Harry and his uber-cool, super wicked power...tsk tsk. He's abusing it and thank goodness Draco's there to stop him. But well, hell, if I had a power like that I'd be using it left and right. Mwahahahaha! But, erm, yes--good thing's Draco's there. And the way Harry controls his anger for Draco. :swoon: He gets an A for effort and a well-deserved kiss from Draco! XD And of course, I love the interaction between my second favorite couple in this story: Arthur and Molly. You make them into such old sweethearts, I can't resisting grinning from sweetness-cuteness overload!
And three, I would sound like a broken record player if I tell you I love how this story is moving along, how it's building up in plot, how you're lacquering Harry and Draco's characters as well as all the other minor characters, how the subtler and finer romantic details in everyone's relationships is what makes your story extra-sprinkles-and-whip-cream special, and how your writing style rocks. So in order to not be a broken record player, I will do my best to not consistently repeat such things in every damn review. This will be the last time, I swear.
...until I get my hands on a thesaurus and find better synonyms. ^_~ :glomps you in thanks: Keep up the stupendous, marvelous, and every other multi-syllabled word work!
Okay, before I REALLY go to bed and stay there, there are three things I must address:
One, I love the twins. George and Fred with the ferret joke was so damn funny! And Draco's response--AHHHH! I squealed, really I did. I saw a spark of the ol' Malfoy we knew before and that provoked the Malfoy-fangirl in me. ^_^ I love the new and improved dcharacter you built upon him, of course, but I'm glad to see some of the original bite in him, too.
Two, Harry and his uber-cool, super wicked power...tsk tsk. He's abusing it and thank goodness Draco's there to stop him. But well, hell, if I had a power like that I'd be using it left and right. Mwahahahaha! But, erm, yes--good thing's Draco's there. And the way Harry controls his anger for Draco. :swoon: He gets an A for effort and a well-deserved kiss from Draco! XD And of course, I love the interaction between my second favorite couple in this story: Arthur and Molly. You make them into such old sweethearts, I can't resisting grinning from sweetness-cuteness overload!
And three, I would sound like a broken record player if I tell you I love how this story is moving along, how it's building up in plot, how you're lacquering Harry and Draco's characters as well as all the other minor characters, how the subtler and finer romantic details in everyone's relationships is what makes your story extra-sprinkles-and-whip-cream special, and how your writing style rocks. So in order to not be a broken record player, I will do my best to not consistently repeat such things in every damn review. This will be the last time, I swear.
...until I get my hands on a thesaurus and find better synonyms. ^_~ :glomps you in thanks: Keep up the stupendous, marvelous, and every other multi-syllabled word work!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 46) Ok, OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant: now what?!!!!!!!!!!
You string us out like live wires and play us like harp strings.
Have mercy...
(Well, not really. If you did then it wouldn't be this good!!!)
XD
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant: now what?!!!!!!!!!!
You string us out like live wires and play us like harp strings.
Have mercy...
(Well, not really. If you did then it wouldn't be this good!!!)
XD
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, I just finished chapter 46. T_T poor Draco...after that sweet (and really really really hot) scene in the Skybox, that stupid Fenton ruins it all! And Harry is getting scarier (and, I guiltily admit, wickedly cooler with the whole kick ass vigilante thing going on) and it seems Draco can't really get a handle on it. :sigh: Harry can be such a cute, blushing boy, but then he can turn face and turn into a sexy--er, bad, very bad killer.
I hope Dula can help out Draco. Ohhh, and I can't wait for Snape to make his appearance!! :squees with suppressed fangirl-ness: And Draco's wand it just plain AWESOME! The dragon's tear was a great choice, of course, and yew trees are so pretty...even though they represent death... :stares at you: ...but that symbol doesn't mean anything, right? THe yew was just coinicidental, right? You're not planning to do anything of that sort to Draco or Harry or Arthur or Molly or Ron or Charlie or Dula or any other character I happen to love, RIGHT?!?!
...please don't. :puppy whimper: T_T I prefer endings tied with a bow at the end, but the death count seems to be starting up again.
Ah hell, whatever! Even if you do kill off all the characters, you'll manage to do it in a way I can't help but still love this story, damn you. =P
Hope to see more soon!
I hope Dula can help out Draco. Ohhh, and I can't wait for Snape to make his appearance!! :squees with suppressed fangirl-ness: And Draco's wand it just plain AWESOME! The dragon's tear was a great choice, of course, and yew trees are so pretty...even though they represent death... :stares at you: ...but that symbol doesn't mean anything, right? THe yew was just coinicidental, right? You're not planning to do anything of that sort to Draco or Harry or Arthur or Molly or Ron or Charlie or Dula or any other character I happen to love, RIGHT?!?!
...please don't. :puppy whimper: T_T I prefer endings tied with a bow at the end, but the death count seems to be starting up again.
Ah hell, whatever! Even if you do kill off all the characters, you'll manage to do it in a way I can't help but still love this story, damn you. =P
Hope to see more soon!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear Samayel, you have no idea how much I missed this story! And so many new chapters! My God, you write fast! And I absolutely adore and applaud you for it. I