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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 54
Oh shit. I haven't reviewed until now, but this chapter has me on the edge of my seat and biting my acrylic nails off. This story has reeled me in, hook, line, and sinker!
One comment: Maybe you've corrected this in more recent works, but your punctuation for paragraphs has been off. When more than one paragraph is attributed to one person without interruption, quotation marks are placed at the start of each paragraph (or when the speaking starts). The final paragraph also carries the closing marks. For example:
Harry said, sighing, "Yada yada Yada. Yada Yada.
"Blah blah blah, Yada Yada.
"Yada Yada. Blah, blah."
Hope that explanation makes sense. *wry grin*
Now I need to continue reading and probably start an ulcer. ;-)
Oh shit. I haven't reviewed until now, but this chapter has me on the edge of my seat and biting my acrylic nails off. This story has reeled me in, hook, line, and sinker!
One comment: Maybe you've corrected this in more recent works, but your punctuation for paragraphs has been off. When more than one paragraph is attributed to one person without interruption, quotation marks are placed at the start of each paragraph (or when the speaking starts). The final paragraph also carries the closing marks. For example:
Harry said, sighing, "Yada yada Yada. Yada Yada.
"Blah blah blah, Yada Yada.
"Yada Yada. Blah, blah."
Hope that explanation makes sense. *wry grin*
Now I need to continue reading and probably start an ulcer. ;-)
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 62
Wow. That was intense!!! And good. Really, really good!
Wow. That was intense!!! And good. Really, really good!
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Re: Epilogue
This is one of most wonderful, unique stories I've read in this fandom; I can't praise it enough. It was well-thought-out and well-written. Bravo!
This is one of most wonderful, unique stories I've read in this fandom; I can't praise it enough. It was well-thought-out and well-written. Bravo!
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July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored this story!!
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely AMAZING story! So glad I stumbled on it
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So you finished this more than a year ago but I just have to tell you anyway that it is amazing and you should go into professional writing (if you are not in it already).
Thank you very much for this.
Thank you very much for this.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Also I wanted to say thanks for much for the nice comment you left on my story (Beauxbatons' Boy). When I read your review I knew your name looked familiar and then I realized you wrote "Redeem Me" and I just recently got done reading it a few weeks ago. I really appreciate the feedback especially from someone with so much talent for writing.
~Jess
~Jess
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly loved your story. It had me craving to read it when I had to stop for whatever reason. It caused a couple of late late nights, but it was defintly worth every minute spent reading it. Absolutly wonderful job on Redeem Me.
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This HP fanfic is the best I've ever read; not only it's greatly detailed, it has a great storyline and the pairing of my favourite characters. I'm not a really as big a fan of Harry Potter fanfic as many out there and I haven't read much of Harry potter bood (original ones that is); but this fanfiction got me hook to the fandom of Harry potter and now I'm really starting to read HP books. This fanfic work is truly amazing; and I agree with you Samayel that it's partly due to the fact that you planned the storyline before writing the fanfic. Btw, I sniffled a lot (emphasis on 'a lot') while reading it, there are just a lot of overdue emotions and a happy ending is the trigger for my signs and tears *i sound poetic and sappy LOL*. Anyway good work and I hope to read more of your works. Ja ne.
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful fanfiction. I read a lot of Harry/Draco stuff but this is by far one of my favorite ever. The plot was wonderful, the characters were portrayed beautifully and I read all 69 chapters in less than 2 days. Needless to say, I was hooked. Very excellent story. There were subtle little things in it that just made it that much better. I will definitely be recommending this to my friends as I know they will appreciate this story. This is just a wonderful fic and I commend you for an job well done!