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for Destiny

by hellkat75

schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
hot
sad
glad that he didn't take her wand
person :D
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good!! I love it!!!! It makes me sad though...TT_TT
person TiffANY
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue

This story is AMAZING!

There is something that is not usually in other people's writing, there is a certain calm about this story and I think that is something a lot of authors
person Britt
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg... so... well, so impossibly sad! that was such a good story. you should continue it. LOVED IT.
person firewall
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hauntingly great. I think you expressed the feelings the two would have very authentically. The boy made up for any past indiscretions by leaving her wand with her. I think you could do a sequel to this but it stands beautifully by itself. Nice job.
person ocard
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was so frickin good, i want to read it over five more times. if this is meant to have a sequal, by all means, let the sequal come SOON!!!!!!!!!!