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for Let's Pretend

by roxierose13

person Sea
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha.
Oh my.
If I were Harry, I would've left Draco. xD;;
That'd be a pretty angsty story though.
But I really did think that Draco was cheating.

Btw. I read so much of your stories, so so much. And I love them all. I spent my whole weekend just reading your fics. I'm such a loser. xD;
But you're an excellent writter. Though, from all the fics I've read, no one had ever noticed any Marks on Harry or Draco, like hickeys.. I'd find it amusing if someone nudged at Harry, questioning him.
person Youngauthor
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story. You had me worried there for a minute, but , there again you never let me down!
person Minue
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story, however, I thought Harry as a bit pathetic. If I met him in real live, I would tell him to get the hell out of that relationsship, because it was clearly abusive. Draco didn't care for Harry as a person at all, and it didn't seem as if that would change any time soon. So, this was a sad ending for me, but very well written.
person alyxanderson
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it kinda reminded me of some bits with harry and ginny in ABA...but harry and ginny will not reconcile. harry and draco belong together!!!
person rice
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok it was good but not excelent
i dont understand draco motivation
and hary's passive attitude
person Jiall
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written with one mistake: the end made no sense whatsoever. Sorry, but that's my opinion. No explanations, no lead up at all. I was left confused and disappointed.
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH! I thought Harry was going to leave him, or find out Draco was with someone else or...SOMETHING! lol. Liked the story, though. Great Job!

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